Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. For example, after a long day, I can quickly put my clothes in the machine and relax while it does the work.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on giving a direct response with clear supporting details. Use appropriate vocabulary related to the topic and avoid filler words or unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in modern homes because they help us clean clothes and floors efficiently, saving time and effort.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but is not very clear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words. Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: I usually read the instructions before using a machine if it is new or complicated. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to avoid damaging it.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, try to provide a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions carefully because they provide essential information that helps avoid mistakes and ensures tasks are done correctly.

× It saved me a lot of fun and effort by walking quickly, showing my love, especially after a long wait.

✓ It saves me a lot of time and effort by working quickly, especially after a long wait.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'walking' instead of 'working'. The verb 'work' in present participle form 'working' correctly describes the machine's action. Also, 'fun' is incorrect in this context; 'time' is appropriate. 'Showing my love' is irrelevant and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.

× For example, in standing of what's my profile with having tired I just woke them into the machine and stuff.

✓ For example, when I am tired, I just put my clothes into the machine and start it.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'In standing of what's my profile with having tired' is nonsensical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× Yes, I believe washing machine is Washing machine is very important in a modern household.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines are very important in a modern household.

The sentence repeats 'washing machine' and uses singular form incorrectly. The plural 'washing machines' and plural verb 'are' agree with the general statement about machines in households.

× Do you say a lot of ****? Laundry or cleaning and manual geek.

✓ They save a lot of effort in laundry, cleaning, and manual work.

The original sentence is unclear and contains inappropriate symbols. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× I'll wash things while for example using washing machine or use your clothing.

✓ For example, I wash clothes using the washing machine.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× If I just only redeemed collection before using a machine, is it there's something unfamiliar or complex?

✓ I only read the instructions before using a machine if there is something unfamiliar or complex.

The original sentence misuses 'redeemed collection' and has incorrect sentence structure. The correction uses the modal verb 'only' properly and corrects the sentence structure for clarity.

× For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully follow the manual to ensure I use it correctly to avoid my damage.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to ensure I used it correctly to avoid damage.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, past tense verbs 'followed' and 'used' are appropriate. 'My damage' is incorrect; 'damage' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, I believe is it was rather important to read instruction carefully.

✓ Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions carefully.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. The correction uses proper sentence structure and present tense to express a general truth. 'Instruction' is pluralized to 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines.

× Instruction proved essential information that helps avoid mistakes and ensure tasks are completely correct.

✓ Instructions provide essential information that helps avoid mistakes and ensure tasks are done correctly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'Instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. 'Proved' is changed to 'provide' to match present tense. 'Ensure tasks are completely correct' is awkward; 'ensure tasks are done correctly' is clearer.