Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は内容が明確ですが、繰り返しの「uh」が多く、流暢さを妨げています。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。具体的な理由や感情を加えると良いでしょう。

Example: My favorite machine at home is my computer because it allows me to do many things efficiently. For instance, I can watch YouTube and Netflix for entertainment, and I also use it to complete my homework and study. This versatility makes it an essential part of my daily life.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りや単語の選択ミスが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。接続詞を使い、具体的で正確な表現を心がけてください。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

Example: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important for our daily life because they help keep our homes clean and healthy. For example, washing machines clean our clothes efficiently, and vacuum cleaners remove dust and dirt from the floors.

Suggestion: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。明確な主語と動詞を使い、理由をはっきり述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に説明することも大切です。

Example: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because improper use can cause accidents. For example, if we do not follow the instructions carefully, the machine might break or become unsafe to use.

Suggestion: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で正確な文を作る練習をし、接続詞を使って理由を明確に述べましょう。

Example: Yes, reading instructions is very important to prevent accidents. Also, since some instructions are written in English or other foreign languages, if you cannot understand them, you should use a translator to read them carefully.

× My favorite machine is computer because I can do a lot of things with this machine.

✓ My favorite machine is the computer because I can do a lot of things with this machine.

The noun 'computer' is countable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item. Omitting the article causes a grammatical error.

× Yes, I think washing machines are sweeping machines are really important to for our living because they're essential to keep our house stay healthy.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important for our living because they're essential to keep our house healthy.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'are' and misuses 'to for'. Also, 'keep our house stay healthy' is redundant; 'keep our house healthy' is correct. The correction fixes plural coordination and preposition usage.

× Yes, I think washing machines are sweeping machines are really important to for our living because they're essential to keep our house stay healthy.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important for our living because they're essential to keep our house healthy.

The phrase 'to for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate purpose or benefit. Also, 'keep our house stay healthy' is incorrect; 'keep our house healthy' is the proper form.

× For example, keeping hazing and cleanness, these machines are a little useful.

✓ For example, keeping hygiene and cleanliness, these machines are a little useful.

The words 'hazing' and 'cleanness' are incorrect in this context. The correct nouns are 'hygiene' and 'cleanliness' to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, but usually there's instructions before using a machine, uh, because the missing use, uh, cause accidents.

✓ Yes, but usually there are instructions before using a machine, because misuse can cause accidents.

'Instructions' is plural, so 'there's' (there is) is incorrect; it should be 'there are'. Also, 'the missing use' is incorrect; 'misuse' is the correct noun. The verb 'cause' should agree with singular 'misuse'.

× Uh, for example, if we don't lead did it, uh, and so there's the uh, it broke.

✓ For example, if we don't read it, it can break.

The phrase 'don't lead did it' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is 'don't read it'. Also, 'it broke' is past tense, but the conditional requires present or future tense. The correction uses present tense and proper verb form.

× Yes, in order to prevent accidents, leading instructions be is really important uh also uh.

✓ Yes, in order to prevent accidents, reading instructions is really important.

'Leading instructions be is' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'reading instructions is'. The verb 'reading' is the gerund form acting as the subject, and 'is' is the correct verb form.

× Some instructions are written in English or as a foreign languages. So if you can't read it, uh, you should translate with using.

✓ Some instructions are written in English or other foreign languages. So if you can't read them, you should use a translator.

'As a foreign languages' is incorrect; it should be 'other foreign languages'. The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'instructions', so 'them' is correct. 'Translate with using' is ungrammatical; 'use a translator' is appropriate.