Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words to make your response more coherent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time. Since I find washing dishes tedious, the dishwasher helps me keep the kitchen clean without much effort.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Focus on giving a clear opinion with specific reasons, and avoid vague or incorrect expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and try to use appropriate vocabulary.

Example: I believe washing and sweeping machines are important, especially for elderly people and pregnant women because these machines reduce physical strain. However, some people might rely on them too much, which could make them less active.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to make your answer smoother and more natural.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with them. By following the steps carefully, I can understand how the machine works and use it properly.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the main idea but has some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I definitely think it is important to read the instructions. Since I am not familiar with new machines, reading the instructions step by step helps me operate them correctly and conveniently.

× Umm, as I think everything is important at home because but if I have to choose one that is the dishwasher.

✓ Umm, I think everything is important at home, but if I have to choose one, it is the dishwasher.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions 'because but' and awkward structure. Simplifying and correctly using 'but' improves clarity and sentence flow.

× Definitely I read all the instruction before I using a machine because I am not a very used to how to use machine.

✓ Definitely, I read all the instructions before using a machine because I am not very used to how to use machines.

The phrase 'before I using' is incorrect; it should be 'before using' as the verb after 'before' requires the -ing form without 'I'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'a machine' should be 'machines' for general use.

× But uh, when I read all the instruction and step by step I know how to do and how it's work.

✓ But, when I read all the instructions step by step, I know how to do it and how it works.

The phrase 'how it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'how it works' to match subject-verb agreement. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'how to do' should be followed by 'it' for clarity.

× I'll definitely, it's very important as we.

✓ I'll definitely say it's very important for us.

The phrase 'as we' is unclear and incorrect here; 'for us' correctly expresses the intended meaning. Also, 'I'll definitely' needs a verb like 'say' to complete the sentence.

× So while umm read the instructions step by step, I know how to do and how to operate that machine, which is very convenient for me.

✓ So while I read the instructions step by step, I know how to do it and how to operate that machine, which is very convenient for me.

The original sentence misses the subject 'I' before 'read'. Also, 'how to do' should be followed by 'it' for clarity.