Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e beshi natural English use korun ebong redundancy koman. Apnar answer e 'washing machine' bar bar use kora hoyeche, ja avoid kora uchit. Apni ekta clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor kichu specific details add korun linking words diye. Sentence gulo 5 er beshi na rakhen.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently. For example, it saves me a lot of time compared to washing by hand, which is tiring. Therefore, I highly recommend using it.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni kichu specific example dite paren jate answer ta aro bhalo hoy. Grammar e kichu chhoto bhul ache, seta thik korun. Sentence gulo 5 er modhye rakhun.

Example: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. For instance, washing machines allow us to do laundry faster and with less effort, saving valuable time. Similarly, vacuum cleaners make cleaning the house easier and more efficient.

Suggestion: Apni sentence structure improve korun ebong grammar er dike beshi mon din. 'prefer that read instruction' er jaygay 'prefer to read the instructions' bola uchit. Apni ekta clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor kichu supporting details add korun linking words diye.

Example: Usually, when I use a new machine, I prefer to read the instructions first because they provide proper knowledge about how to use it. This helps me operate the machine correctly and avoid mistakes.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e filler words (umm, uh) koman. Sentence gulo aro clear ebong shongothito korun linking words diye. Apni specific karon ebong result diye answer ta bhalo korte paren. Grammar o sentence structure improve korte hobe.

Example: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because without them, you might not use the machine properly. As a result, it can cause difficulties or even damage. Therefore, I always recommend reading the instructions before using any machine.

× I usually prefer washing machine because washing machine is very useful for me.

✓ I usually prefer the washing machine because the washing machine is very useful for me.

The phrase 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular machine being referred to. Also, 'washing machine' is singular and used correctly here, but the article is missing, which is a common error in English usage.

× It helped me to wash my clothes properly, that's why I recommended it.

✓ It helps me to wash my clothes properly, that's why I recommend it.

The student is talking about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' and 'recommend' should be used instead of past tense 'helped' and 'recommended'. Using past tense here incorrectly suggests the action happened only once in the past.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very important.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important.

When talking about machines in general, the plural form 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used to indicate more than one or the category as a whole.

× Washing machine help us to laundry much faster and umm with less effort which saves a lot of time.

✓ Washing machines help us to do laundry much faster and with less effort, which saves a lot of time.

The subject 'washing machines' is plural, so the verb 'help' is correct. However, 'laundry' is a noun, so the verb 'do' is needed before it. Also, 'with' should be used instead of 'and umm with'. The sentence needed slight restructuring for clarity.

× Similarly, sweeping machine or vacuum cleaner make cleaning house easier and more efficiently.

✓ Similarly, a sweeping machine or vacuum cleaner makes cleaning the house easier and more efficient.

When using 'or' between two singular nouns, the verb should be singular 'makes'. Also, 'cleaning house' needs the definite article 'the' before 'house'. 'More efficiently' should be 'more efficient' to correctly modify 'cleaning' as an adjective phrase.

× Usually when I use a new machine, I prefer that read instruction because it can gives a proper knowledge about it and you can use it properly by reading the instructions.

✓ Usually when I use a new machine, I prefer to read the instructions because it can give proper knowledge about it and you can use it properly by reading the instructions.

The phrase 'prefer that read instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to read the instructions'. 'Can gives' is wrong because modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb, so 'can give' is correct. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× Yes, I think so, because if you don't read the instructions, you can't umm, use it properly.

✓ Yes, I think so, because if you don't read the instructions, you can't use it properly.

The sentence is mostly correct, but the filler 'umm' should be omitted for clarity and fluency in formal speech.

× And sometimes it uh, makes many difficulties to use.

✓ And sometimes it causes many difficulties in use.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Makes many difficulties to use' is incorrect. The verb 'causes' fits better, and 'difficulties in use' is the correct phrase. Also, filler 'uh' should be omitted.

× That's why I always recommend it to read the instructions and after that you use it.

✓ That's why I always recommend reading the instructions before you use it.

The phrase 'recommend it to read' is incorrect; 'recommend reading' is correct. Also, 'and after that you use it' is better expressed as 'before you use it' for clarity and naturalness.