Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly state your favourite machine and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I dislike washing clothes by hand. It saves me a lot of time, so I can focus on other tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they make household chores easier and save time. However, some people might prefer doing these tasks manually.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more naturally and use linking words to explain your approach.

Example: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I like to learn by trying it myself. This practical approach helps me understand how it works.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons, using appropriate linking words for coherence.

Example: I don't think it is very important to read instructions because many machines are easy to use. However, reading them can help avoid mistakes sometimes.

× Well my favorite questions in my house is the washing machines because I very afraid of washing and it desist so it helped me a lot to for me so I can have a lot of time to do other job.

✓ Well, my favourite machine in my house is the washing machine because I am very afraid of washing and it does it, so it helps me a lot, allowing me to have a lot of time to do other jobs.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'questions' instead of 'machine' which is singular, and 'washing machines' should be singular to match 'machine'. Also, 'it desist' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'it does it' to indicate the machine performs the washing. 'Helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match the present context. 'Other job' should be plural 'other jobs' to indicate multiple tasks. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× Well, with me, that's a, that's much of that important. But with other people, I think, yeah, if they are not lazy ones. So washing and sweeping machines is should, uh, you know, is not that necessarily.

✓ Well, for me, that's not that important. But for other people, I think, yeah, if they are not lazy. So washing and sweeping machines should not be considered absolutely necessary.

The phrase 'that's much of that important' is incorrect; it should be 'that's not that important'. 'Lazy ones' is informal and unnecessary; 'lazy' suffices. 'Washing and sweeping machines is should' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'washing and sweeping machines should'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yeah, I'm an, umm, technology oriented person, so I did not choose to read the instructions before using a message. I want to try it by my own, so well, I just practice in a practical way.

✓ Yeah, I'm a technology-oriented person, so I do not choose to read the instructions before using a machine. I want to try it on my own, so I just practise in a practical way.

'An' before a consonant sound 'technology' is incorrect; it should be 'a'. 'Message' is a wrong word here; it should be 'machine'. 'By my own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on my own'. 'Did not choose' is past tense but the context suggests present habit, so 'do not choose' is appropriate. 'Practice' as a verb in British English is spelled 'practise'.

× Well, I don't think that that much important because I still use emerges without instructions at all. So I think perhaps anybody can do that.

✓ Well, I don't think that is that important because I still use machines without instructions at all. So I think perhaps anybody can do that.

'That much important' is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. 'Emerges' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'machines'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper word choice.