Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and complete. Try to avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I almost use it every day" say "I use it almost every day." Also, finish your thoughts fully, such as explaining why the rice cooker is quick and helpful. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the rice cooker in my kitchen because I use it almost every day. It is very helpful as it cooks rice quickly and saves me a lot of time, allowing me to prepare meals more efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid unfinished sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, explain why some people prefer manual methods and how that relates to their preferences.

Example: I think the importance of washing and sweeping machines depends on personal preferences. Some people prefer washing clothes by hand or sweeping manually because they believe machines waste energy and time, while others find machines very convenient and efficient.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like "uh" and incomplete phrases such as "I will not much." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, explain your habit clearly and why you follow instructions for new machines.

Example: If I have a new machine that I haven't used before, I always read the instructions carefully to avoid any problems. However, if I have used the machine previously, I usually don't need to read the instructions again.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but is unclear and contains hesitations. Try to speak more confidently and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, organise your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, explain why reading instructions is important with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions for new machines because they might work differently than expected. Some devices require initial setup or charging before use, so reading the instructions helps to use them correctly and safely.

× I almost use it every day.

✓ I almost use it every day.

No correction needed here as 'use' is correctly used in the present simple tense to express habitual action.

× It's really helpful for me to make rice and it's really quick so I don't have to.

✓ It's really helpful for me to make rice and it's really quick, so I don't have to spend much time cooking it.

The original sentence ends abruptly after 'so I don't have to', which creates an incomplete thought. Adding 'spend much time cooking it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Some people do not like to use washing machines or sweeping machines as they believe it's a waste of time and also energy as well.

✓ Some people do not like to use washing machines or sweeping machines as they believe they are a waste of time and energy.

The pronoun 'it's' refers to a singular subject, but here it should refer to the plural 'washing machines or sweeping machines'. Therefore, 'they are' is the correct pronoun and verb agreement.

× So they like prefer washing their clothes by hand or surfing the.

✓ So they prefer washing their clothes by hand or sweeping the floor.

The phrase 'like prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. Also, 'surfing the' is incomplete and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Sweeping the floor' fits the context better.

× if it's a new machine which I haven't used it before, I will definitely go through the instructions before I use it because I might face some issues if I do not follow the instructions.

✓ If it's a new machine which I haven't used before, I will definitely go through the instructions before I use it because I might face some issues if I do not follow the instructions.

The phrase 'which I haven't used it before' contains an unnecessary pronoun 'it'. The correct form is 'which I haven't used before'.

× So I usually go through them before, but if I have used it beforehand, I will not much.

✓ So I usually go through them before, but if I have used it beforehand, I will not do so much.

The phrase 'I will not much' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'do so much' clarifies the meaning that the speaker will not review the instructions extensively if already familiar.

× Yes, if it's something new, I recommend re going through the instructions because we might be it might be completely different than we think and some instrument machines need some uh startup times and even uh first recharge uh times before using it so.

✓ Yes, if it's something new, I recommend going through the instructions again because it might be completely different from what we think, and some machines need startup time and even initial charging time before use.

The original sentence has redundant and unclear pronouns ('we might be it might be') and awkward phrasing. 'Going through the instructions again' is clearer than 're going through'. 'Different than' should be 'different from'. 'Instrument machines' is unclear; 'machines' suffices. 'Startup times' and 'first recharge times' are better expressed as 'startup time' and 'initial charging time'.