Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and provide specific details about why you like the mixer. For example, explain what tasks it helps with and how it benefits you.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the mixer, which my brother gifted me. It helps me prepare food quickly and easily, especially when making batter or dough. Because of this, I find cooking much more enjoyable and less time-consuming.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. Use proper linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about why these machines are important and how they save time.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives because they make household chores easier and faster. For instance, washing machines clean clothes efficiently, saving us a lot of time and effort compared to washing by hand.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Clearly state your habit and explain why reading instructions is helpful, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it correctly. This prevents damage and makes it easier to fix any problems that may arise.

Suggestion: Complete your answer with a clear reason and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain why reading instructions is important.

Example: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because they provide guidance on how to use the machine safely and effectively, which helps prevent accidents and damage.

× The favorite machine in my home is Mixer, which was gifted me from my brother.

✓ The favorite machine in my home is the mixer, which was gifted to me by my brother.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'mixer' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. Also, 'gifted me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'gifted to me'. Additionally, 'from my brother' should be 'by my brother' to indicate the giver.

× It helps mix ourselves our work faster and easier, so I like it very much.

✓ It helps me mix my work faster and easier, so I like it very much.

The pronouns 'ourselves' and 'our' are incorrectly used here. Since the speaker is referring to themselves, 'me' and 'my' should be used. Also, 'mix our work' is unclear; 'mix my work' fits better in context.

× Yes, Was it missing and sweeping? Missing are very important in our daily life because it it helps our work easier and faster.

✓ Yes, washing and sweeping are very important in our daily life because they help make our work easier and faster.

'Was it missing and sweeping?' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'washing and sweeping'. Also, 'Missing are' is wrong; the plural subject requires 'are'. 'It it helps' is a repetition and should be 'they help'. 'Our work easier and faster' needs 'make' to be grammatically correct.

× It takes just a few time, few minute or few times for washing clothes or for whipping the floor.

✓ It takes just a little time, a few minutes, or a few times for washing clothes or for sweeping the floor.

'A few time' is incorrect; 'a little time' is used for uncountable nouns like 'time'. 'Few minute' should be 'a few minutes' as 'minutes' is countable. 'Whipping the floor' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'sweeping'.

× Instruction are very useful for fixing the machine or other things.

✓ Instructions are very useful for fixing the machine or other things.

'Instruction' should be plural 'Instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. The verb 'are' correctly agrees with the plural subject.

× So first of all I will definitely read the instruction before using a machine because it helps to fix me a machine or it helps us fixing them.

✓ So first of all, I will definitely read the instructions before using a machine because they help me fix the machine or help us fix them.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Helps to fix me a machine' is incorrect; it should be 'help me fix the machine'. Also, 'helps us fixing them' should be 'help us fix them' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instruction because it helps to.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because they help.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'helps to'; it should be completed as 'help' to make sense and agree with the plural subject.