Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with specific reasons.

Example: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it for official work and assignments. Without it, my life would be very difficult as I rely on it daily for many tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has pronunciation and vocabulary errors, and some sentences are unclear. Use correct terms like 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine'. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to explain why they are important.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives because they help us keep our clothes and homes clean, which is essential for maintaining good health.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and explain your point clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is necessary to understand how to operate it properly. For example, I learn how to turn it on and off and how to use its functions safely.

Suggestion: Your answer is on the right track but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Make sure to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain the importance clearly.

Example: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they provide health and safety measures. Without reading them, a person might harm themselves or misuse the machine due to lack of knowledge about its functions.

× My laptop is my favorite machine because I carried all my official work, my assignment and without laptop I life will be so mess I cannot do anything.

✓ My laptop is my favorite machine because I carry all my official work, my assignments, and without a laptop, my life would be a mess; I cannot do anything.

The verb 'carried' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be present tense 'carry' to match the context. Also, 'life will be so mess' is incorrect; it should be 'my life would be a mess' to express a hypothetical situation. Additionally, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. Use of articles before 'laptop' and proper punctuation improves clarity.

× My laptop is my favorite machine because I carried all my official work, my assignment and without laptop I life will be so mess I cannot do anything.

✓ My laptop is my favorite machine because I carry all my official work, my assignments, and without a laptop, my life would be a mess; I cannot do anything.

The phrase 'all my official work, my assignment' mixes singular and plural forms improperly. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to correctly quantify multiple tasks.

× My laptop is my favorite machine because I carried all my official work, my assignment and without laptop I life will be so mess I cannot do anything.

✓ My laptop is my favorite machine because I carry all my official work, my assignments, and without a laptop, my life would be a mess; I cannot do anything.

The noun 'laptop' requires an article 'a' before it when used in a general sense. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar.

× Yes, passing the scene and shipping machine are more important in our daily life.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are more important in our daily life.

The words 'passing the scene' and 'shipping machine' are incorrect and seem to be misheard or misspelled. The correct terms are 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines', both plural to refer to multiple machines.

× Without that you cannot keep clean our dress, our houses and it cannot live a healthy life.

✓ Without them, you cannot keep our clothes and houses clean, and you cannot live a healthy life.

The pronouns 'that' and 'it' are incorrectly used to refer to plural machines; 'them' and 'you' should be used instead. Also, 'dress' should be plural 'clothes' to refer to garments generally.

× This is more crucial things in my daily life.

✓ These are more crucial things in my daily life.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular but refers to plural 'things'; it should be 'these' to agree in number.

× Yes I always do, but it necessary to learn the instruction.

✓ Yes, I always do, but it is necessary to learn the instructions.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'it' to form the correct modal expression 'it is necessary'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× Without that I cannot operate machine.

✓ Without that, I cannot operate the machine.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'machine' and a comma after 'that' for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I have to 1st read and learn how to operate open, close, how to do power on the set.

✓ I have to first read and learn how to operate, open, close, and power on the set.

The phrase '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. Also, the sentence needs commas and conjunctions to list actions properly.

× The requirement that that machine may not work for.

✓ Otherwise, the machine may not work properly.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Yes, it is always preferable to read the instruction because it contains the health and safety measures to be carried out while operating that machine.

✓ Yes, it is always preferable to read the instructions because they contain the health and safety measures to be carried out while operating that machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'instructions'.

× Other that someone may be hazard himself that knowing the fully functionality of the machine, how to operate that machine and how to.

✓ Otherwise, someone may hazard themselves by not fully knowing the functionality of the machine, how to operate it, and how to use it safely.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and is incomplete. 'Hazard himself' is incorrect; 'hazard themselves' is appropriate for gender neutrality. The sentence is restructured for clarity and completeness.