Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, clarify your points with more specific details and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain why it is time-saving and what 'cutting edge' features it has.

Example: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time, especially for families with many children. Moreover, modern washing machines have advanced features like quick wash cycles and energy efficiency, which make laundry easier and more convenient.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how these machines save time, water, and electricity. Avoid vague phrases like 'electronic power and water problem'.

Example: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and reduce water and electricity consumption. For instance, modern machines use less water and energy compared to manual cleaning methods, which helps conserve resources.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid filler words and complete your sentences fully. Also, explain briefly why you rely on the installer instead of reading instructions.

Example: No, I usually don't read the instructions because the technician who installs the machine explains all the buttons and demonstrates how to use it, which helps me understand better.

Suggestion: Use more formal language and provide reasons to support your opinion. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid generalizations.

Example: I don't think it's always necessary to read the instructions because trying the machine yourself can help you remember how to use it better. However, reading instructions can be useful for understanding complex functions or safety precautions.

× I think it's umm, washing machine because it's very useful, especially for families who have a lot of children and you, uh, it's very time saving and cutting edge so you can use it in a better way.

✓ I think it's umm, the washing machine because it's very useful, especially for families who have a lot of children and, uh, it's very time-saving and cutting-edge so you can use it in a better way.

The phrase 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific type of machine. Also, 'time saving' and 'cutting edge' should be hyphenated when used as compound adjectives before a noun or in this descriptive context. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, these days we have electronic power and water problem and I think having a sweeping machine and washing machines at your home, it's saves a lot of time and water and electronic.

✓ Well, these days we have electronic power and water problems and I think having a sweeping machine and washing machines at your home saves a lot of time, water, and electricity.

The word 'problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues. Also, 'it's saves' is incorrect; it should be 'saves' to agree with the subject. 'Electronic' is incorrectly used; the correct noun is 'electricity' when referring to the resource consumed.

× No, actually the man who installed the machine explained all the. Bottoms and show us how, uh, show us how to use this machine.

✓ No, actually the man who installed the machine explained all the buttons and showed us how, uh, to use this machine.

The word 'Bottoms' is a misspelling of 'buttons'. Also, the verb 'show' should be in past tense 'showed' to match the past action. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I think if you tried it out yourself, you remember all the buttons and it's more effective than you just read the instruction.

✓ No, I think if you try it out yourself, you remember all the buttons and it's more effective than just reading the instructions.

The verb tense should be present 'try' to match the conditional structure. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it usually refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'than you just read' is awkward; 'than just reading' is more natural and grammatically correct.