Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite natural and relevant, but it can be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'watch' multiple times.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the television because I enjoy watching various shows. For example, I often watch cartoons like Shin Chan or stream series on Netflix, which helps me relax after a long day.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use correct vocabulary ('sweeping' instead of 'stripping'), complete your thoughts, and link ideas logically. Also, avoid sentence fragments to make your answer clearer.

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and make household chores more efficient. Moreover, they help maintain good hygiene by cleaning clothes and floors effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by refining sentence structure for better flow.

Example: It depends on the situation; however, if I am using a device for the first time, I always read the instructions carefully. This helps me understand how to operate it correctly and avoid any mistakes.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be more precise and fluent. Avoid vague phrases like 'or anything' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions carefully before using any device because it helps prevent accidents and ensures safe operation.

× I guess in my home my favorite machine would be television because I'm a binge watcher.

✓ I guess in my home my favorite machine would be the television because I'm a binge watcher.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'television' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. This is an article error (ID 22).

× So I'll turn on my TV, either watch Shin Chan or any other cartoon, or log into my Netflix account and watch a series.

✓ So I'll turn on my TV, either watch Shin Chan or any other cartoon, or log into my Netflix account to watch a series.

The verb 'watch' after 'log into my Netflix account' should be preceded by 'to' to indicate purpose. This is an incorrect use of verb form related to infinitive usage, categorized under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13).

× Yes, I believe washing machines and stripping machines are important because they reduce the time and help us be more efficient at household core, maintaining good hygiene and. Reduce.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they reduce the time and help us be more efficient at household chores, maintaining good hygiene and reducing effort.

The word 'stripping' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping'. Also, 'household core' is incorrect; it should be 'household chores'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'Reduce.' which is incomplete; it should be 'reducing effort' or similar. These are incorrect word choices and sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× If I'm using a device for the first time, I always check for the instruction how to use it or what I shouldn't do and how to use the device correctly.

✓ If I'm using a device for the first time, I always check the instructions on how to use it, what I shouldn't do, and how to use the device correctly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'check for the instruction how to use it' is incorrect; it should be 'check the instructions on how to use it'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Yes, I believe it's better to read the instructions carefully before using the device in order to avoid any disaster or anything. Accidents.

✓ Yes, I believe it's better to read the instructions carefully before using the device in order to avoid any disaster or accidents.

The sentence is fragmented with 'or anything. Accidents.' which is incorrect. It should be combined into a single phrase 'any disaster or accidents' for clarity and correctness. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).