Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Example: My favourite machine at home is my printer, which was passed down from my parents who are teachers. Printers are essential for their daily work, so having my own printer is very convenient. For example, as a high school student, I can easily print all my homework assignments at home without any trouble.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and unclear. Make sure to directly answer the question first, then support your opinion with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid vague or confusing statements.

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, in Vietnam, people traditionally clean manually, but using these machines allows us to relax and focus on other tasks, making daily chores much easier.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: It depends on the machine. For devices I am familiar with, like TVs or hair dryers, I rely on my experience and instincts. However, for new machines such as air fryers or cooling irons, I always read the instructions carefully before using them.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Focus on using correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it provides detailed information on how to use a product correctly and safely. For example, when assembling furniture or operating electronic devices, following the instructions helps prevent mistakes and accidents.

× They are teacher shows.

✓ They are teachers.

The word 'teacher shows' is incorrect because 'shows' is not the plural form of 'teacher'. The correct plural form is 'teachers'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Especially when you are in high school student, you can print all of your homework without.

✓ Especially when you are a high school student, you can print all of your homework without any problem.

The phrase 'in high school student' is incorrect; it should be 'a high school student'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'without' missing an object. This is a sentence structure error.

× Weeping or washing machines are very convenient and advantageous since it can help you to save your effort and give you more time to do other tasks to relax and do your jobs.

✓ Sweeping or washing machines are very convenient and advantageous since they can help you save your effort and give you more time to do other tasks, relax, and do your jobs.

The pronoun 'it' is used incorrectly to refer to plural subjects 'weeping or washing machines'. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'weeping' is a typo for 'sweeping'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and a spelling error.

× Well, it also depends if they are the things that I have familiar with that I have familiarized me with them like TV rich freighters or hair dryer.

✓ Well, it also depends if they are things that I am familiar with, like TV, refrigerators, or hair dryers.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing such as 'I have familiar with' and 'I have familiarized me with them'. The correct form is 'I am familiar with'. Also, 'rich freighters' is a typo for 'refrigerators'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure error.

× But when it comes to the things that I not know first thing about them like air fryer or cooling iron, I'll just read the instructions.

✓ But when it comes to things that I do not know anything about, like an air fryer or an iron, I'll just read the instructions.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' in 'I not know', which is required in present tense negative sentences. Also, 'first thing about them' is awkward and should be 'anything about'. 'Cooling iron' is better expressed as 'an iron'. This is a present tense issue and sentence structure error.

× Well, maybe I believe that reading the instructions carefully provide industrial information about how on how to use their product properly or complete a test correctly, which helps prevent the mistakes and accident.

✓ Well, maybe I believe that reading the instructions carefully provides essential information about how to use the product properly or complete a task correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'reading'. 'Industrial information' is incorrect; 'essential information' is more appropriate. 'How on how' is redundant and should be 'how'. 'Their product' is vague; 'the product' is better. 'Complete a test' should be 'complete a task'. 'The mistakes and accident' should be plural without 'the'. This involves subject-verb agreement, incorrect quantifiers, and article errors.

× follow the instructions ensures everything works properly and safely.

✓ Following the instructions ensures everything works properly and safely.

The verb 'ensures' requires a singular subject. 'Follow the instructions' is an imperative phrase and cannot be the subject. Changing it to the gerund 'Following the instructions' makes it a noun phrase that agrees with the verb. This is a subject-verb agreement error.