Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer clearly by stating your favorite machine first, then explaining why with specific reasons. For example, mention how you use the laptop for work and entertainment to enrich your answer.

Example: My favorite machine at home is my laptop because I use it daily for both work and entertainment. It helps me complete my tasks efficiently and also allows me to watch movies and browse the internet in my free time.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'Mama'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be more specific about why these machines are important, for example, mention how washing machines save time and effort especially in cold weather, and how sweeping machines help keep the house clean efficiently.

Example: Yes, washing machines are very important because they make laundry much easier, especially during cold weather when washing by hand is difficult. Similarly, sweeping machines save time and effort by quickly cleaning floors, allowing us to maintain a tidy home more easily.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state that you read the instructions to understand how to operate the machine correctly, including the functions of the buttons. Keep your sentences simple and coherent.

Example: Yes, I always read the instruction manual before using a new machine. This helps me understand how to operate it properly and know the purpose of each button.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but is a bit confusing. Use clear and simple sentences to explain that reading instructions helps you understand the functions of buttons, including emergency switches, which can prevent damage to the machine. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, reading the instructions is very important because it teaches us how to use the buttons correctly, including emergency switches. This knowledge can help prevent accidents and protect the machine from damage.

× Laptop is my favorite machine because, uh, I used it a lot in my daily life.

✓ The laptop is my favorite machine because, uh, I use it a lot in my daily life.

The noun 'Laptop' needs the definite article 'The' because it refers to a specific item. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match the present tense context of daily life usage.

× Is it for a work and for entertainment?

✓ It is for work and for entertainment.

The phrase 'a work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. Also, the question form is incorrect; it should be a statement to match the context.

× Yes, of course, because umm for laundry the washing machines play a vital role, while if we do it by manual that it is very difficult like in the cold weather and the sweeping machine also very good because it saves our time Mama and we can do anytime.

✓ Yes, of course, because for laundry the washing machine plays a vital role, while if we do it manually, it is very difficult, especially in cold weather. The sweeping machine is also very good because it saves our time and we can use it anytime.

The plural 'washing machines' should be singular 'washing machine' to match the context. 'Play' should be 'plays' for subject-verb agreement. 'By manual' should be 'manually' (adverb). 'Sweeping machine also very good' needs 'is' verb. 'Mama' seems out of context and is removed. 'We can do anytime' corrected to 'we can use it anytime' for clarity.

× Yes, I already read the instruction book before opening the machine because I can get out to run the machine in the right way and we are the buttons and the button is used for what purpose is Yeah I away instructor.

✓ Yes, I already read the instruction book before using the machine because I can learn how to run the machine in the right way and understand the buttons and their purposes. Yes, I always follow the instructions.

'Before opening the machine' is better as 'before using the machine'. 'I can get out to run' is unclear and corrected to 'I can learn how to run'. 'We are the buttons' is incorrect and changed to 'understand the buttons'. 'Yeah I away instructor' is unclear and corrected to 'Yes, I always follow the instructions'.

× Yes, because by reading the instructions of a new machine we can get the knowledge of about buttons and what button to operate an emergency switch top buttons or in emergency we can save our machine before burning it out. It is very important instruction.

✓ Yes, because by reading the instructions of a new machine we can gain knowledge about the buttons and which button operates the emergency switch. In an emergency, we can save our machine before it burns out. The instructions are very important.

'Get the knowledge of about buttons' is corrected to 'gain knowledge about the buttons'. 'What button to operate an emergency switch top buttons' is unclear and corrected to 'which button operates the emergency switch'. 'In emergency' corrected to 'In an emergency'. 'Burning it out' corrected to 'it burns out'. 'It is very important instruction' corrected to 'The instructions are very important' for grammatical correctness.