Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and repetition, make a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Be concise (max 5 sentences) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'saves water', 'cleans thoroughly').

Example: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher. It saves a lot of water compared with hand-washing and cleans dishes more thoroughly. Also, it frees up time for other tasks, so I can relax or study while it runs.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and give a structured answer: state your opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas. Replace vague words ('very good') with precise benefits.

Example: Yes, I think they are essential because they save a great deal of time and effort. For example, a washing machine handles large loads quickly, and a robotic sweeper keeps the floor clean while I do other tasks. As a result, I have more time for work and relaxation.

Suggestion: Make the answer fluent and complete: give a direct yes/no, then explain with specific reasons and an example. Eliminate hesitations and finish your sentence with a clear benefit (e.g., 'prevent damage, ensure safety').

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it safely and correctly. For instance, reading the manual for my blender prevented me from overfilling it and damaging the motor.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, concise reasoned answer with one or two specific effects of reading instructions. Avoid repetition and filler; use linking phrases like 'so' or 'therefore' to conclude. Mention concrete outcomes (longer lifespan, fewer repairs, safer use).

Example: Yes, it is important because instructions show the correct operating steps and safety precautions. Therefore, following them reduces the risk of accidents and lowers the chance of costly repairs, which extends the machine's lifespan.

× My favorite machine at home, uh, is a dishwasher and I think that, uh, dishwasher is, is a sample of modern technology, uh, because, uh, save, uh, water rather than, uh, washing with hands and also, uh, wash washes, uh, dishes very clean and.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher, and I think the dishwasher is an example of modern technology because it saves water compared with washing by hand and it washes dishes very cleanly.

Multiple issues: missing and incorrect articles, wrong verb forms, awkward structure and repetition. 'a dishwasher' should be 'the dishwasher' when specifying a particular appliance; 'is a sample' is unnatural — use 'is an example'; 'save' needs subject 'it' and present tense 'saves'; 'washing with hands' should be 'washing by hand'; 'wash washes' is incorrect repetition and needs passive/active form — use 'washes dishes very cleanly'. Improve by using clear subject-verb structure and proper articles and adverb form.'

× Yes. Uh, actually, I think, uh, these are very, uh, significant and crucial to our life, uh, because they save, uh, for us a lot of time and we can do, uh, instead of, uh, washing dishes to uh, more things. And, uh, that is very good.

✓ Yes. Actually, I think these machines are very important in our lives because they save us a lot of time and we can do other things instead of washing dishes, which is very good.

Issues: awkward phrase 'significant and crucial to our life' — use 'important in our lives'; incorrect word order 'they save, for us a lot of time' should be 'they save us a lot of time'; incorrect structure 'we can do, instead of, washing dishes to more things' — correct to 'we can do other things instead of washing dishes'. Maintain present simple tense for general truths.'

× Yes, absolutely. I uh try always uh, use uh and read instruction before I use the machine because it's very important uh to know how uh, we use the machine uh and it saves our machine uh, from uh.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I always try to read the instructions before I use the machine because it's very important to know how to use the machine and it protects the machine from damage.

Problems: word order 'try always' should be 'always try'; missing infinitive 'try to read'; 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; 'know how we use the machine' should be 'know how to use the machine' (use infinitive for purpose); incomplete phrase 'saves our machine from' — clarify 'protects the machine from damage'. Use correct verb forms and complete the idea.'

× Yes, I think that is very important and crucial because, uh, reading instruction, uh, help us to use the machine, uh, correctly and also reduce, uh, maintenance and uh, repairing the machine And, uh, I think that uh, reading instruction help us to and help.

✓ Yes, I think that is very important and crucial because reading the instructions helps us use the machine correctly and also reduces maintenance and repairs on the machine. Also, I think reading the instructions helps us in other ways.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'instructions' and missing plural 'instructions'; subject-verb agreement 'reading instruction help' — 'reading the instructions helps' because the gerund acts as singular; 'reduce, maintenance and repairing the machine' is incorrect — use 'reduces maintenance and repairs' or 'reduces the need for maintenance and repair'. The final fragment was incomplete; complete it by stating 'helps us in other ways'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article use.'