Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve fluency and reduce hesitations; give a clear topic sentence followed by two specific supporting points with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "is a sample" -> "is an example", "save water" -> "saves water"). Keep answer to under five sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher. It saves a lot of water compared with washing by hand, and it cleans dishes more thoroughly. For example, the dishwasher uses hot water and strong jets, so plates and pans come out spotless and hygienic.

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetitive filler words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example or consequence using a linking word such as "because" or "so".

Example: Yes, I think they are very important because they save people a lot of time. For instance, with a washing machine and a vacuum cleaner you can finish household chores quickly, so you have more time for work or relaxation.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and complete the idea clearly. Use correct verb forms and pluralization ("read the instructions", "I always try to read the instructions"). Add a concise reason and a short example of what might happen if you don't.

Example: Yes, I always try to read the instructions before using a machine because they explain the correct settings and safety precautions. For example, following the manual can prevent electrical faults or damage to the device.

Suggestion: Make the response structured: state your opinion, give two clear reasons using linking words, and finish with a brief example. Fix grammar: "reading instructions helps us" and "reduce maintenance and repairs". Avoid trailing unfinished phrases.

Example: Yes, it's important to read the instructions because they help you use the machine correctly and reduce the need for maintenance or repairs. For example, following the care instructions can extend the machine's lifespan and avoid costly breakdowns.

× My favorite machine at home, uh, is a dishwasher and I think that, uh, dishwasher is, is a sample of modern technology, uh, because, uh, save, uh, water rather than, uh, washing with hands and also, uh, wash washes, uh, dishes very clean and.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher, and I think that the dishwasher is an example of modern technology because it saves water compared to washing by hand and also cleans dishes very well.

Errors: incorrect pluralization/word forms and missing articles. 'a dishwasher' then 'that dishwasher' is inconsistent; 'is a sample' should be 'is an example'; 'save water' needs a subject 'it' and singular verb 'saves'; 'washing with hands' should be 'washing by hand'; 'wash washes' is redundant and incorrect; 'very clean' should modify 'cleans dishes very well'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('the' when referring to a specific machine), use correct subject-verb agreement, replace awkward phrases with natural collocations ('example', 'washing by hand', 'cleans ... very well').

× Yes. Uh, actually, I think, uh, these are very, uh, significant and crucial to our life, uh, because they save, uh, for us a lot of time and we can do, uh, instead of, uh, washing dishes to uh, more things. And, uh, that is very good.

✓ Yes. Actually, I think these are very important and crucial to our lives because they save us a lot of time and we can do more things instead of washing dishes, which is very good.

Errors: awkward phrasing and pronoun usage. 'significant and crucial to our life' should be 'important and crucial to our lives' (plural). 'they save, uh, for us a lot of time' should be 'they save us a lot of time' (correct object pronoun placement). The phrase 'we can do, uh, instead of, uh, washing dishes to uh, more things' is ungrammatical — reorder to 'we can do more things instead of washing dishes'. Suggestion: use concise, natural word order and correct pronoun forms; ensure subject and object positions are correct.

× Yes, absolutely. I uh try always uh, use uh and read instruction before I use the machine because it's very important uh to know how uh, we use the machine uh and it saves our machine uh, from uh.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I always try to read the instructions before I use the machine because it's very important to know how we use the machine and it prevents damage to the machine.

Errors: gerund/infinitive and noun form issues. 'I uh try always uh, use uh and read instruction' should be 'I always try to read the instructions'—use the infinitive 'to read' after 'try' and plural 'instructions'. 'how we use the machine' is correct phrasing; 'it saves our machine from' is incomplete and awkward—use 'it prevents damage to the machine'. Suggestion: use 'try to' + verb, pluralize 'instructions', and complete the idiom 'prevent damage to ...'.

× Yes, I think that is very important and crucial because, uh, reading instruction, uh, help us to use the machine, uh, correctly and also reduce, uh, maintenance and uh, repairing the machine And, uh, I think that uh, reading instruction help us to and help.

✓ Yes, I think that is very important and crucial because reading the instructions helps us to use the machine correctly and also reduces maintenance and repairs to the machine. I also think that reading the instructions helps us in other ways.

Errors: quantifier and verb agreement and noun forms. 'reading instruction' should be 'reading the instructions' (add article and plural). 'help us' should be 'helps us' because the subject 'reading the instructions' is singular (gerund phrase). 'reduce maintenance and repairing the machine' should be 'reduces maintenance and repairs to the machine'. The final fragment is incomplete; expanded to a complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'reading the instructions' as singular subject with 'helps', pluralize nouns like 'instructions' and 'repairs', and avoid sentence fragments by finishing thoughts.