Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và âm ừ/tiếng lấp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp (ví dụ: because, so, which). Chú ý chia động từ đúng (use computer every day → use my computer every day; to working → to work) và tránh các mệnh đề thừa.

Example: My favourite machine at home is my computer. I use it every day for work and study, so it helps me complete tasks much faster and organise my assignments more easily.

Suggestion: Sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh từ sai (planes → play, time consuming → time-consuming) và hoàn thành ý đầy đủ. Dùng liên từ để nối lý do (because, so) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh kết thúc câu dang dở.

Example: Yes, I definitely think washing machines and vacuum cleaners play an integral role in our lives because they save a lot of time and make our homes much cleaner. For example, a washing machine can finish a load of laundry in under an hour, which frees up time for other activities.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác (hearing machine → using a new machine; are watching you to to know → watch someone or try it yourself). Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn, và thêm một câu giải thích rõ ràng với liên từ. Tránh lỗi chia động từ và lặp từ.

Example: No, I don't usually read the instructions before using a new machine. Instead, I try it out and learn by watching someone else or by experimenting myself, although this can sometimes lead to mistakes.

Suggestion: Cải thiện trật tự từ và chia động từ (I think reading instructions…; it makes them more likely…). Nên nói rõ lý do và đưa ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh từ thừa như 'may' trong chỗ không cần thiết.

Example: Yes, of course. I think reading the instructions before using a device is very important because it helps us operate it correctly and avoid damaging it. For instance, the manual often explains safety precautions and proper maintenance tips.

× Uh, when it's come to my favorite machine in my home, I would choose, uh, my computer because I use computer every day in my daily life to working and also studying, which help me to, uh, allow me to do my, my exercise more easier.

✓ When it comes to my favorite machine at home, I would choose my computer because I use the computer every day for work and study, which helps me do my exercises more easily.

The sentence contains several issues: incorrect phrase 'it's come' should be 'it comes' (subject-verb construction), missing article 'the' before 'computer', incorrect preposition 'to working' should be 'for work', incorrect verb form 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'computer', and comparative 'more easier' is redundant; use 'more easily' (adverb). Suggestions: use the fixed phrase 'when it comes to', include articles with singular countable nouns, use 'for' + noun for purpose, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct adverb form for manner.

× Ah definitely yes I think washing machine and sweeping machine are both planes integral role in our life because they help us to avoid time consuming and also make our house more cleaner which can.

✓ Ah definitely yes. I think washing machines and sweeping machines both play an integral role in our lives because they help us save time and make our houses cleaner.

Errors: singular/plural inconsistency — 'washing machine and sweeping machine' should be plural when speaking generally; word 'planes' is incorrect form of 'play'; 'time consuming' misused; 'more cleaner' is redundant comparative; 'our life' should be plural 'our lives'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, use correct verb 'play', use 'save time' or 'time-consuming' appropriately, and avoid double comparatives.

× No, I don't have a habit of reading instruction before hearing machine. I use it instantly and are watching you to to know how to use it instead of reading the instruction paper.

✓ No, I don't have a habit of reading instructions before using a machine. I use it immediately and watch others to learn how to use it instead of reading the instruction manual.

Issues: 'reading instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; 'hearing machine' is incorrect — should be 'using a machine'; 'instantly' better as 'immediately'; 'are watching you to to know' has wrong verb form and pronouns — use 'watch others to learn'; 'instruction paper' more naturally 'instruction manual' or 'instructions'. Suggestions: use plural 'instructions', correct verb for action 'using', use 'watch others' or 'watch someone' to learn, and prefer 'manual' for written guide.

× Yes, of course. I think read instruction before using something is very important because it make it may help us to use the things more correctly and in the right way.

✓ Yes, of course. I think reading instructions before using something is very important because it may help us use things more correctly and in the right way.

Errors: 'I think read instruction' should use gerund 'reading instructions'; 'instruction' should be plural; 'make it may help' is ungrammatical — choose 'may help' or 'can help'; unnecessary 'to' after 'help us'; use 'use things' without 'the' for general reference. Suggestions: use gerund after 'think' when referring to an action, keep 'instructions' plural, choose a single modal ('may' or 'can'), and omit unnecessary words.