Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences, use linking words and specific reasons or examples. Correct errors like “Silly enough” (use “Surprisingly” or omit), and grammatical mistakes (“Without my Internet I can do” → “Without the Internet I can’t do”).

Example: My favourite machine at home is the Wi‑Fi router because it provides internet for my studies and work. For example, I use it daily to attend online classes and submit assignments. Therefore I rely on it almost 24/7, especially during urgent tasks.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement, then give specific reasons and correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace unclear words (‘Hooters’, ‘physical source’, ‘confident’) with accurate terms (e.g. ‘household chores’, ‘physical effort’, ‘easier’). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

Example: Yes, they are important because most people are busy with work and cannot spend hours on household chores. For example, a washing machine saves time and effort by cleaning a whole load of clothes quickly, and a robotic sweeper keeps floors tidy without manual sweeping.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, avoid double negatives and repetition. Use one or two reasons and a linking phrase. Correct grammar: “I don’t usually read the instructions” and “but sometimes I check the manual if there is an error.”

Example: I usually don’t read the instructions because I feel comfortable using most machines, but I keep the manual in a folder. If an error occurs or something is unfamiliar, I check the instructions to fix the problem.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary: ‘instructions’ or ‘manuals’, not ‘margins’. Explain consequences briefly and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’.

Example: Yes, it is important to read the instructions before using a machine because they explain safe operation and maintenance. For example, reading a manual can prevent accidents and help you avoid damaging the appliance.

× Without my Internet I can do any of my homework or work related tasks.

✓ Without my Internet I cannot do any of my homework or work-related tasks.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'can' where inability is intended; this is a modality and negation issue tied to 'there be' type in the list (ID 3). Use 'cannot' (or can't) to express inability. Also add a hyphen in 'work-related' to form a compound adjective describing 'tasks'. Suggestion: Use 'cannot' for inability and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× So I need it like 24/7 when there is kind of emergency or even in my daily schedule.

✓ So I need it almost 24/7 for emergencies and in my daily routine.

The original mixes informal phrasing and incorrect noun forms. 'There is kind of emergency' is ungrammatical; use the plural 'emergencies' or 'an emergency'. 'Daily schedule' is better as 'daily routine'. 'Like 24/7' is informal; 'almost 24/7' is clearer. Maintain present tense for habitual need.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are essential in this modern era.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential in this modern era.

The sentence uses singular nouns while the verb 'are' implies plural; correct to plural form. Also 'sweeping machine' is uncommon in English; use 'vacuum cleaner' or 'floor sweeper'. Ensure subject and verb number agree.

× Everyone is working day and night, so it is not practical for us to do Hooters and balance our walk and physical source.

✓ Everyone works long hours, so it is not practical for us to do household chores and maintain our walking and physical fitness.

The sentence contains nonstandard words ('Hooters') and unclear phrases ('balance our walk and physical source'). Rephrase to convey the intended meaning: 'household chores' and 'maintain our physical fitness' or 'stay physically active'. Fix sentence structure and word choice for clarity.

× Washing machine and this kind of electric things has made our life much more confident than before.

✓ Washing machines and these kinds of electrical appliances have made our lives much easier than before.

Subjects are plural so the verb must be plural ('have' not 'has'). 'This kind of electric things' is ungrammatical; use 'these kinds of electrical appliances'. 'Confident' is the wrong adjective here — 'easier' or 'more convenient' fits context. Also pluralize 'life' to 'lives' when referring to people generally.

× No, I don't prefer to read the instruction before using a machine because I'm very good at using machines.

✓ No, I don't prefer to read the instructions before using a machine because I'm very good at using machines.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to manuals in general. Use the plural form to match general meaning. The rest of the sentence is acceptable though 'I don't prefer to' is slightly unnatural; 'I prefer not to' is more natural but not required by the given list.

× I not generally don't have to see a manual paper, but sometimes if there is kind of emergency or error, I keep my instruction in a folder and then see what's happening.

✓ I generally don't have to look at a manual, but sometimes if there is an emergency or error, I keep the instructions in a folder and then check to see what's happening.

The original contains a double negative ('I not generally don't') and wrong verb choices. Remove double negation and use 'don't generally' or 'generally don't'. 'See a manual paper' is unnatural; use 'look at a manual' or 'read the manual'. Change 'there is kind of emergency' to 'there is an emergency' and 'keep my instruction' to 'keep the instructions'. Use 'check' or 'see what's happening' for clarity.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction before operating any kind of margins.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions before operating any kind of machine.

Use plural 'instructions' and 'machine' instead of 'margins' (likely a wrong word). 'Any kind of' should be followed by a countable noun 'machine'. Ensure correct vocabulary and plural form for instructions.

× The people generally don't buy a lot of machine, so it is always advisable to read any kind of manuals or instruction so any kind of incidents like bad is prevented.

✓ People generally don't buy many machines, so it is always advisable to read manuals or instructions so that bad incidents are prevented.

Use 'people' not 'the people' for general statements. 'A lot of machine' is incorrect; use 'many machines'. 'Any kind of manuals or instruction' mixes singular and plural; use 'manuals or instructions'. Add 'that' after 'so' for clarity and change 'any kind of incidents like bad is prevented' to 'bad incidents are prevented' and match plural agreement.