Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es clara y directa, pero debes evitar repeticiones y mejorar la fluidez. Intenta usar conectores para que la respuesta sea más coherente y natural. Además, cuida la gramática y la pronunciación de palabras como "forgot" y evita redundancias como "to to to".

Example: Yes, I believe I am quite good at memorizing things. For instance, at work, I usually remember all my tasks and meetings without constantly checking my schedule. However, occasionally I do forget some things.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es buena porque das un ejemplo específico, pero hay errores de fluidez y repetición de palabras como "I I" y frases poco naturales. Trata de usar conectores para mejorar la coherencia y evita repetir palabras innecesariamente.

Example: Yes, sometimes I forget important things. For example, today I forgot about a morning meeting in another building. I went to my office first, and then a coworker texted me asking where I was, which reminded me of the meeting.

Suggestion: La respuesta es clara y específica, pero la estructura puede mejorarse para mayor naturalidad. Evita frases largas y confusas, y usa conectores para organizar mejor las ideas.

Example: Currently, I need to remember that my work partner is on vacation. She left me her pending hiring processes, so besides focusing on my own departments, I also have to check on the others.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es un poco confusa y repetitiva. Intenta ser más claro y conciso, usando conectores para explicar tus ideas y evitar repeticiones como "my my". Además, termina tus frases para que la respuesta sea completa.

Example: I usually rely on my memory to remember important things. However, I realize I need an agenda because I sometimes write notes on sticky papers that get lost, so a more reliable system would help me stay organized.

× But sometimes from time to time I tend to forgot things also.

✓ But sometimes from time to time I tend to forget things also.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense form, but after 'tend to' we need the base form of the verb, which is 'forget'. This is because 'tend to' is followed by the infinitive form without 'to' (bare infinitive). To improve, always use the base form of the verb after modal-like expressions such as 'tend to'.

× So I went straight to my office 1st and then I received an A text from a coworker which said that where are you?

✓ So I went straight to my office first and then I received a text from a coworker which said, 'Where are you?'.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before 'A text'; it should be 'a text' because 'text' starts with a consonant sound. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. Additionally, the direct speech should be properly punctuated and capitalized. To improve, use the correct indefinite article based on the initial sound of the following word and write ordinal numbers in words in formal contexts.

× But I have to also remember that I have to check for with the other departments.

✓ But I also have to remember that I have to check with the other departments.

The phrase 'check for with' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'check' in this context is 'with'. Also, the adverb 'also' is better placed after the subject 'I'. To improve, use the correct preposition 'with' after 'check' when referring to departments and place adverbs appropriately.

× I try to remember things just using my my memory right now, but I think that I need some kind of agenda, maybe because I happen to start writing paper in post, it's all my pending work and then those posted disappear, so I have to be really careful with them and I think I need something like.

✓ I try to remember things just using my memory right now, but I think that I need some kind of agenda, maybe because I tend to start writing papers on post-it notes; it's all my pending work and then those notes disappear, so I have to be really careful with them and I think I need something like that.

The phrase 'writing paper in post' is unclear and incorrect. The correct expression is 'writing papers on post-it notes'. Also, 'happen to start' is better expressed as 'tend to start' to indicate habitual action. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification. To improve, use correct prepositional phrases and clarify the meaning for better understanding.