Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi perlu memperbaiki tata bahasa dan membuat kalimat lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising both short-term and long-term information. For instance, when I study new material, I can usually recall most of it the next day, which helps me in my learning process.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Example: Fortunately, I have never forgotten anything important. I always try to remember things that are significant, especially those related to my close friends or my future career, which helps me stay focused.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda perlu lebih terstruktur dan jelas. Hindari penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan padat. Jelaskan dengan detail spesifik yang relevan.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, especially the times to feed and take care of my cats, including grooming and giving them milk.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan dan kata pengisi. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: I believe that the best way to remember important things is by making it a consistent habit. When we do something regularly, it becomes easier to remember over time.

× I can prove it when I'm study about something the next day.

✓ I can prove it when I'm studying something the next day.

The verb 'study' should be in the present participle form 'studying' after the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense.

× I could remember all the material that I've been read the day before.

✓ I could remember all the material that I've read the day before.

The phrase 'I've been read' is incorrect; the present perfect tense requires the past participle 'read' without 'been'.

× Fortunately, I haven't forget about something important as long as I remember.

✓ Fortunately, I haven't forgotten anything important as far as I remember.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past participle form 'forgotten' after 'haven't' to form the present perfect tense.

× I always remember what's the important things, especially that has related to my closest friend or something that relate to my future or career so far I can remember it well and not forgot about.

✓ I always remember what the important things are, especially those that are related to my closest friend or something that relates to my future or career; so far, I can remember them well and not forget about them.

The sentence has issues with singular/plural agreement and verb agreement. 'What's' should be 'what', 'things' is plural so the verb should be 'are', 'that has' should be 'those that are', and 'relate' should be 'relates'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense.

× I need to remember about the daily activity schedule in my daily life, especially about, uh, my path.

✓ I need to remember the daily activity schedule in my daily life, especially my path.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed by a direct object.

× So I have cats and I must not forget about how to what time I need to feed them and, uh, how to grooming or to give them milk.

✓ So I have cats and I must not forget what time I need to feed them and how to groom them or give them milk.

The phrase 'forget about how to what time' is incorrect; 'forget' should be followed directly by the object without 'about'. Also, 'how to grooming' should be 'how to groom'.

× In my opinion, to remember to remember important things is we must make it a habit to be a consistent.

✓ In my opinion, to remember important things, we must make it a habit to be consistent.

The sentence is awkward and redundant. 'To remember to remember' is repetitive, and 'a consistent' is incorrect; 'consistent' is an adjective and does not need an article here.

× So when it become our habits in daily habits and we consistent to it, we, uh, prove it to it will easier make it easier for us to remember.

✓ So when it becomes our daily habit and we are consistent with it, it will be easier for us to remember.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'become' should be 'becomes' for subject-verb agreement; 'habits in daily habits' is redundant; 'we consistent to it' should be 'we are consistent with it'; 'prove it to it will easier make it easier' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'it will be easier'.