Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ "depends" nhiều lần và có thể thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: It depends on the type of information. For instance, I find it easier to remember things I hear, like conversations or instructions, but I struggle to recall faces or written texts.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý đã nói trước đó và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

Example: Yes, I often forget faces, especially of people I've met only once. For example, I once forgot my teacher's face, which made me feel embarrassed.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as my work tasks and my two children's schedules. Because of this, I often take notes to help me keep track.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Since I have many things to remember daily, including work and my children's schedules, I use two types of notes on my phone to keep track of important and urgent tasks.

× I'm good at memorizing things that I heard through my ears

✓ I'm good at memorizing things that I have heard

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have heard' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present, rather than simple past 'heard'.

× I'm not very good at remembering the text or people faces

✓ I'm not very good at remembering texts or people's faces

The plural form 'texts' is needed for general reference, and the possessive form 'people's faces' is correct to indicate faces belonging to people.

× I easily forget like faces or people

✓ I easily forget faces or people

The word 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect here; removing it corrects the sentence.

× especially people who I've met just once

✓ especially people whom I've met just once

The relative pronoun 'whom' is correct as the object of the verb 'have met'.

× I forgot my teacher's face

✓ I forgot my teacher's face

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I have too many input every day

✓ I have too much input every day

'Input' is an uncountable noun, so 'too much' is the correct quantifier instead of 'too many'.

× I have to try to remember, you know, and I have to take note so that I don't have to remember everything

✓ I have to try to remember, you know, and I have to take notes so that I don't have to remember everything

The phrase 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to writing down multiple items.

× I use two type of notes on my phone

✓ I use two types of notes on my phone

The plural form 'types' is needed to agree with the number 'two'.

× to help me remember the things that are important or urgent thing that needs to be solved during a day

✓ to help me remember the things that are important or urgent that need to be solved during the day

The phrase should be consistent in number: 'things' plural with 'need' plural verb; also 'during the day' is more natural.