Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达需更自然，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising because my major requires me to remember many facts and details, which helps me perform well in exams.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子结构，并具体说明忘记的事情及其影响。

Example: Yes, I once forgot an important exam because I was very busy and stressed, which affected my final score significantly.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达日常需要记住的具体事项，并避免重复。

Example: During school days, I need to remember my daily classes, homework, and upcoming exams, but I usually have nothing important to remember during vacations.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误影响表达，建议使用正确的时态和句式，清晰描述记忆方法。

Example: I usually write important things on my phone or set alarms. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me.

× I think I'm quite good at memorizing things because my major needs a strong memory skill such as remember facts and details, and I usually do them well in my exams.

✓ I think I'm quite good at memorizing things because my major needs a strong memory skill such as remembering facts and details, and I usually do them well in my exams.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（-ing），这里'such as'后面应该用动名词'remembering'，而不是动词原形'remember'。

× Yes, I had forgotten something important before.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important before.

这里描述过去发生的事情，使用一般过去时即可，不需要过去完成时'had forgotten'。

× For example, I forgot the P class exam because I was busy at that moment and I was stressful because it's make a big difference in my final scores.

✓ For example, I forgot the P class exam because I was busy at that moment and I was stressed because it makes a big difference in my final scores.

'was stressful'应为'was stressed'，因为这里是描述人的感受；'it's make'应为'it makes'，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加-s。

× I think on vacation I had nothing important to remember, but when I I'm in school I need to remember the classes I need to have every every day and something homework and exams.

✓ I think on vacation I have nothing important to remember, but when I'm in school I need to remember the classes I have every day and some homework and exams.

'had'应改为一般现在时'have'，因为表达的是习惯或常态；'I I'm'应改为'I'm'；'need to have every every day'应改为'have every day'；'something homework'应改为'some homework'。

× Often I will write them down in my phone to remind me or set a clock.

✓ Often I write them down in my phone to remind me or set a clock.

这里描述习惯动作，通常用一般现在时，不需要用将来时'will'。

× Additionally, I am sometimes ask my friends to remind me that important things.

✓ Additionally, I sometimes ask my friends to remind me of those important things.

'I am sometimes ask'应改为'I sometimes ask'，去掉多余的'am'；'remind me that important things'应改为'remind me of those important things'，动词'remind'后接介词'of'，且'that'应改为'those'指代复数。