Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer phrases. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: Unfortunately, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget my friends' names, which is quite embarrassing. This happens to me quite often.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'stop being so not'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about your experience.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once missed a university exam because I forgot the time. As a result, I failed the exam, and since then, I have tried to be more organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to provide more specific examples.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, but I especially struggle with remembering names. For example, I have worked with some colleagues for several years but still forget their names sometimes. I also find it difficult to remember the names of certain work processes.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has some unclear parts. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Example: To remember important things, I usually write them down. Writing helps me focus and remember better. Therefore, whenever I have something important to remember, I make sure to note it on paper.

× Sometimes I forgot my friend's name which is so impressed, embarrassing and I asked the other friend what was her name and this happens to me a lot.

✓ Sometimes I forget my friend's name which is so impressive and embarrassing, and I ask another friend what her name is; this happens to me a lot.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is appropriate. 'Impressed' is an adjective describing a feeling, but here 'impressive' (causing admiration) fits better. Also, 'asked' should be 'ask' to match the habitual present. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Once I had a very important exam in the university, but I forgot the time so I missed the exam and I failed, so I tried to stop being so not.

✓ Once I had a very important exam at the university, but I forgot the time, so I missed the exam and failed; I tried to stop being so forgetful.

The phrase 'in the university' is better as 'at the university' (preposition correction). The phrase 'stop being so not' is incorrect; likely intended 'stop being so forgetful'. The past tense verbs 'had', 'forgot', 'missed', and 'failed' are correct here as the event is in the past.

× Once I had a very important exam in the university, but I forgot the time so I missed the exam and I failed, so I tried to stop being so not.

✓ Once I had a very important exam at the university, but I forgot the time, so I missed the exam and failed; I tried to stop being so forgetful.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending or having an event at an institution; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location for events like exams.

× The main problem that I have in memorizing same things is memorizing the names.

✓ The main problem that I have in memorizing some things is memorizing names.

The word 'same' is incorrect here; 'some' is the correct quantifier to indicate an unspecified amount. Also, 'the names' can be simplified to 'names' unless referring to specific names already known.

× Sometimes I work with a colleague for about 7 years but I don't know their name and sometimes I forget the name of the process.

✓ Sometimes I work with colleagues for about 7 years but I don't know their names, and sometimes I forget the name of the process.

'A colleague' is singular, but 'for about 7 years' suggests multiple colleagues over time or a long period; if referring to multiple people, 'colleagues' is correct. Also, 'their name' is correct for plural antecedent. The rest is correct.

× For remembering something important, I need to write it down. When I put it down on a paper, I actually try to stick it in my mind and I get successful in this. So whenever umm something important I have to remember, I am.

✓ To remember something important, I need to write it down. When I put it on paper, I try to stick it in my mind, and I succeed. So whenever there is something important I have to remember, I do this.

The phrase 'For remembering' is better as 'To remember' (infinitive form). 'Put it down on a paper' is better as 'put it on paper'. 'I get successful in this' is awkward; 'I succeed' is clearer. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.