Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免使用口头语如“uh”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以直接表达自己在学习方面记忆较好，但生活琐事记忆较差，同时避免重复表达。

Example: I am quite good at memorising academic knowledge because I often review my study materials. However, I find it difficult to remember small daily details.

Suggestion: 句子结构不够准确，存在语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达自己很少忘记重要的事情，并说明原因。

Example: I rarely forget important things because I use various methods to remind myself. Forgetting them would cause serious problems.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“differences”用词不当，句子不够连贯。建议明确指出需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子。

Example: I need to remember many things in my daily life, but the most important is my work deadlines. For instance, I have a paper due next week, so I must finish it on time.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清。建议简洁明了地说明使用手机提醒功能帮助记忆，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Example: I usually use tools like my mobile phone to help me remember important things. For example, I set reminders and alarms that notify me at the right time.

× I seldom to forget those important things because I will try my best to use different things to make me to force me remember those things in case I miss them.

✓ I seldom forget those important things because I will try my best to use different things to force myself to remember those things in case I miss them.

动词'seldom'后面不需要加不定式'to forget'，应直接用动词原形'forget'。此外，'make me to force me remember'结构不正确，应改为'make me'或'force myself to remember'。这里使用反身代词'myself'更合适。

× I seldom to forget those important things because I will try my best to use different things to make me to force me remember those things in case I miss them.

✓ I seldom forget those important things because I will try my best to use different things to force myself to remember those things in case I miss them.

句中'make me to force me remember'使用了错误的代词和结构，应使用反身代词'myself'，并调整动词形式。

× For example, I have a paper which will provided in in next week, so I must try my best to provide them as quickly as I can.

✓ For example, I have a paper which will be provided next week, so I must try my best to submit it as quickly as I can.

'provided in in next week'中重复使用了介词'in'，且'provided'应为被动语态'will be provided'。此外，'provide them'用词不当，应该用'submit it'来表达提交论文。

× For example, I have a paper which will provided in in next week, so I must try my best to provide them as quickly as I can.

✓ For example, I have a paper which will be provided next week, so I must try my best to submit it as quickly as I can.

'provided'作为过去分词需要与助动词'be'连用构成被动语态，缺少'be'导致语法错误。

× Usually I like to use some tools to help me remember the. For example I will use the mobile phone and they can provide a timetable and ask that time they will notice me in the mobile phone screen so I can remember them.

✓ Usually I like to use some tools to help me remember things. For example, I will use my mobile phone and it can provide a timetable and notify me at that time on the phone screen so I can remember them.

句中'the'用法错误，应为'things'。'they'指代不明，手机应使用单数代词'it'。'notice me'应改为'notify me'更符合表达习惯。

× Usually I like to use some tools to help me remember the. For example I will use the mobile phone and they can provide a timetable and ask that time they will notice me in the mobile phone screen so I can remember them.

✓ Usually I like to use some tools to help me remember things. For example, I will use my mobile phone and it can provide a timetable and notify me at that time on the phone screen so I can remember them.

'in the mobile phone screen'介词使用错误，应为'on the phone screen'表示在屏幕上。