Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide one or two specific examples without repeating the same idea. Avoid filler phrases like "I guess" and "like" to sound more natural and confident.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget why I started doing something. For example, sometimes I open the refrigerator and then forget what I wanted to get. This shows that my memory isn't very reliable.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid filler words like "like" and "I don't know". Provide a more specific example to support your point.

Example: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always make a list to remind myself. However, I sometimes forget everyday tasks, such as locking the door or doing the laundry, especially when I'm busy.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer more clearly and avoid repeating phrases like "like" and "I think". Use linking words to explain your example and be more precise with your vocabulary. For instance, say "a special water bottle with time markers" instead of "which has like marked".

Example: I need to remember to drink enough water every day. I have a special water bottle with time markers showing how much I should drink by certain times, like by 7:00 AM. However, I often forget to drink enough despite this reminder.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "as I have mentioned" and filler words like "like". Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear example.

Example: I usually remember important things by making lists on my mobile phone. This method helps me avoid forgetting tasks, such as when I make a grocery list before shopping.

× I have really weak memory, which is a bad thing I guess.

✓ I have a really weak memory, which is a bad thing I guess.

The noun 'memory' in this context is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar.

× Even if I go to refrigerator, I open it and I just like zone out.

✓ Even if I go to the refrigerator, I open it and I just like zone out.

The noun 'refrigerator' is a specific object here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before singular, countable nouns when referring to a specific object is incorrect.

× But like regular things, I forget it, like locking the door or, I don't know, doing the laundry.

✓ But with regular things, I forget them, like locking the door or, I don't know, doing the laundry.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but 'regular things' is plural, so the pronoun should be plural 'them' to agree in number. Also, 'like' is better replaced with 'with' to indicate the context of forgetting.

× Even I got special water bottle which has like marked.

✓ I even got a special water bottle which has markings on it.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'special water bottle' and the phrase 'has like marked' is ungrammatical. 'Like' is unnecessary here, and 'marked' should be 'markings' to indicate the labels on the bottle.

× There are things written on it like till like for example till 7:00 AM I have to drink this much water and all but I still end up forgetting it because of my weak memory.

✓ There are things written on it, like for example, 'till 7:00 AM I have to drink this much water,' and all, but I still end up forgetting it because of my weak memory.

The sentence is awkward and repetitive with 'like till like'. Removing the redundant 'like' and adding commas improves clarity. Also, quotation marks are added to indicate the text on the bottle.

× As I have mentioned in the question you asked me earlier, whenever I have something important to do, I usually make a list in my mobile so that I do not end up missing it.

✓ As I mentioned in the question you asked me earlier, whenever I have something important to do, I usually make a list on my mobile so that I do not end up missing it.

The phrase 'make a list in my mobile' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a device. Also, 'have mentioned' can be simplified to 'mentioned' for natural speech.