Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构重复且有语法错误，如“due to reason that”应改为“because”。建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时使用更地道的连接词。

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Instead, I prefer taking photos because I can add them to my phone calendar, which helps me remember important events.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“due to the reason that they would lie”应为“because they can remind me”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免歧义。

Example: Yes, I have. When I was in high school, I forgot my best friend's birthday, which upset her. Since then, I have been using note apps because they can remind me of important events.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“I'm think”应为“I think”。建议注意语法准确性，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Well, I need to remember my daily schedule and meeting times because I think it's impolite to keep others waiting.

Suggestion: 表达重复且不够自然，建议简化句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式，如用“because”替代“due to reason that”。

Example: I usually take photos to help me remember important things because I can add them to my phone calendar and get reminders.

× No I'm not. I would like to take photos to remember things due to reason that I can add these photos to my phone calendar, which means I wouldn't forget something important.

✓ No, I'm not. I like to take photos to remember things because I can add these photos to my phone calendar, which means I won't forget something important.

这里的“would like to”表示愿望或请求，但句子中表达的是习惯或事实，应该用一般现在时的“like”。另外，“due to reason that”表达不自然，改为“because”更合适。最后，“wouldn't forget”应改为“won't forget”，表示将来不会忘记。

× Yes, I have. When I was in high school I forgot my best friend's birthday which made her very unhappy. Since then I would like to use note apps due to the reason that they would lie. They would remind me of important events.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was in high school, I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made her very unhappy. Since then, I have liked to use note apps because they can remind me of important events.

“would like to”表示愿望，不适合表达过去持续的习惯，改为“have liked”更合适。句中“due to the reason that”表达冗余，改为“because”。“they would lie”明显错误，应为“they can remind”。

× Well, I need to remember my daily schedule, plus I also need to remember the meeting time. I'm think is not polite to let other people wait for me.

✓ Well, I need to remember my daily schedule, plus I also need to remember the meeting time. I think it is not polite to let other people wait for me.

“I'm think”是错误的时态和结构，应改为“I think”。此外，缺少形式主语“it”，应补充为“it is not polite”。

× I would like to take photos to remember things due to reason that I can add those photos to my phone calendar, which means I wouldn't forget something important.

✓ I like to take photos to remember things because I can add those photos to my phone calendar, which means I won't forget something important.

“would like to”表示愿望，不适合表达习惯，改为“一般现在时like”。“due to reason that”表达不自然，改为“because”。“wouldn't forget”应改为“won't forget”，表示将来不会忘记。