Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about your memorising skills.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because, during my school and college years in India, we were often required to memorise tasks and assignments. This practice helped me develop strong memory skills, which I still use today.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about what you forgot and the situation.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For example, once my family asked me to bring something from outside, but I forgot to bring it home because I was distracted. This shows that it is difficult to remember everything all the time.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words. Try to give a direct answer with clear supporting details and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you manage it.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. Since my schedule is hectic, I often note down these things on my smartphone and set reminders to ensure I don't forget them.

Suggestion: Your answer is better but still has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to respond with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific details about your methods for remembering important things.

Example: I usually save important tasks on my smartphone or tablet and set reminders to help me remember them. Additionally, because of my academic background, I have developed good memory habits that assist me in recalling important information.

× I think this is a common practice in Indian student because they are given this exercise from their child during school and college to remember everything and to memorize every task and assignment.

✓ I think this is a common practice among Indian students because they are given this exercise from their childhood during school and college to remember everything and to memorize every task and assignment.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'from their child' is incorrect; it should be 'from their childhood' to indicate the time period when the exercise is given.

× Uh so as I'm Indian student I'm also learn from so I don't know how to memorize.

✓ Uh, so as I'm an Indian student, I have also learned this, so I know how to memorize.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'I'm Indian student' needs an article 'an'. 'I'm also learn' is incorrect; it should be 'I have also learned'. The phrase 'I don't know how to memorize' contradicts the previous statement, so corrected to 'I know how to memorize' for coherence.

× Yes, it happened several times with me.

✓ Yes, it has happened several times to me.

The present perfect tense 'has happened' is more appropriate to indicate experiences up to now. Also, 'with me' should be 'to me' to express that something happened affecting the speaker.

× So several times I went outside.

✓ So, several times I have gone outside.

The present perfect tense 'have gone' is better to express repeated actions in the past with relevance to the present. Also, a comma after 'So' improves clarity.

× I had given a Tasker as my family were to bring something, but I have just forgotten to bring it to the home.

✓ I had been given a task as my family wanted me to bring something, but I just forgot to bring it home.

'Tasker' is incorrect; 'task' is appropriate. 'My family were' should be 'my family wanted me' for clarity. 'To the home' is better as 'home'. Also, 'have just forgotten' is changed to simple past 'just forgot' for consistency.

× Then there I will.

✓ Then, I will remember next time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I will remember next time' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× I always keep memorized, but sometimes also need to note down few things which uh, uh, needed, uh, which I cannot remember.

✓ I always try to memorize, but sometimes I also need to note down a few things which I cannot remember.

'Keep memorized' is incorrect; 'try to memorize' is better. 'Few things' should be 'a few things' to indicate some items. Removed filler words for clarity.

× Duty, hectic schedule.

✓ Due to my hectic schedule and duties,

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Rewriting as 'Due to my hectic schedule and duties,' makes it a proper phrase explaining the reason.

× I prefer to note down my smartphone so that and make a reminder when I said.

✓ I prefer to note things down on my smartphone and set reminders when needed.

'Note down my smartphone' is incorrect; it should be 'note things down on my smartphone'. 'Make a reminder when I said' is unclear; corrected to 'set reminders when needed' for clarity.

× I mostly shut down the important things to be done in my smartphone or in my tablet and set a reminder for that.

✓ I mostly write down the important things to be done on my smartphone or tablet and set reminders for them.

'Shut down' is incorrect; 'write down' is appropriate. 'In my smartphone' should be 'on my smartphone'. 'Set a reminder for that' changed to plural 'set reminders for them' to match plural 'things'.

× Otherwise most of the time I remember things as it has been inculcated in our academic life.

✓ Otherwise, most of the time I remember things because it has been inculcated in our academic life.

Adding 'because' clarifies the cause-effect relationship. Also, a comma after 'Otherwise' improves readability.