Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話清楚說明原因，避免重複和語法錯誤。

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, memorising key points helped me pass exams with high scores at my university.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且有語法錯誤。建議你完整表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

Example: I rarely forget important things because I always pay close attention to them. For instance, I set reminders to ensure I don't miss important appointments.

Suggestion: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，且內容不夠具體。建議你用更準確的詞彙並清楚說明原因。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my water bottle, keys, and phone. This is important because staying hydrated is essential, especially in Taiwan's hot weather.

Suggestion: 回答簡潔但可以更自然流暢。建議你使用更自然的表達方式並加上連接詞。

Example: I usually take notes on my phone, which helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

× Yes, and that's why I can get into the top university in Taiwan because all the subject you can just memorize the the questions and you will be able to pass the exam with a really high school.

✓ Yes, and that's why I can get into the top university in Taiwan because all the subjects you can just memorize the questions and you will be able to pass the exam with a really high score.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple academic subjects. Also, 'high school' is incorrect here; it should be 'high score' to indicate a good exam result.

× if it's something that's really important, I won't forget them because it is, uh, quite crucial for me and also for the others.

✓ if it's something that's really important, I won't forget it because it is, uh, quite crucial for me and also for the others.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but refers to 'something' which is singular, so it should be 'it' to match the singular subject.

× So usually I would take really care on the things that I.

✓ So usually I would take really good care of the things that I.

The correct preposition after 'take care' is 'of', not 'on'. Also, 'really care' is incomplete; it should be 'really good care' for clarity.

× I mean in Taiwan you have to remember to bring your water bottle and your keys, also your phones.

✓ I mean in Taiwan you have to remember to bring your water bottle and your keys, also your phone.

The word 'phones' is plural but usually one carries one phone, so 'phone' is more appropriate here.

× And I think that would be fine because for water it is really hard in Taiwan.

✓ And I think that would be fine because water is really hard in Taiwan.

The phrase 'for water it is really hard' is awkward; 'water is really hard' is the correct expression to describe water hardness.

× So you must take water with you, otherwise you will be really resource.

✓ So you must take water with you, otherwise you will be really thirsty.

The word 'resource' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'thirsty' or 'in need of water'.

× Usually I will take a note on my phone and that reminds me to do everything that are really important.

✓ Usually I will take a note on my phone and that reminds me to do everything that is really important.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'everything' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.