Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrasing, which affects naturalness and clarity. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm', and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will improve your score.

Example: I'm not very good at memorizing everything, but I find it easier to remember special moments because they have a strong emotional impact on me. For example, I can easily recall important events in my life, such as family celebrations, because they are meaningful.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are coherent and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I once forgot my parents' anniversary. I didn't realize the date until the next day when I saw many posts on social media. It made me feel bad because I had not prepared anything for them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about what you need to remember daily and avoid filler words.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as work assignments and reading. Additionally, I try to remember special moments and things related to my parents because they are important to me.

Suggestion: Your answer has repetition and some unclear phrasing. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your methods. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Example: I remember important things by writing them down in my notebook or on my mobile phone notes. Sometimes, I try to memorize them myself, but when I am worried about forgetting, I rely on my personal diary to keep track of everything.

× I'm not very good at memorizing everything, but I, uh, find it easier remember that, umm, specials are important.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing everything, but I, uh, find it easier to remember that, umm, specials are important.

The verb 'remember' after 'find it easier' requires the infinitive form 'to remember' rather than the base form. Using 'to remember' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× For example, uh, I can easily recall that special moments and special things in my, uh, life because the hyper is strong emotional impact.

✓ For example, uh, I can easily recall that special moments and special things in my, uh, life because they have a strong emotional impact.

The phrase 'the hyper is strong emotional impact' is incorrect. It should be 'they have a strong emotional impact' to correctly refer to 'special moments and special things' and to use proper subject-verb agreement and noun phrase.

× Yes, I once forget an important date of my mom and dad anniversary so that time I don't know that tomorrow is my parents anniversary.

✓ Yes, I once forgot an important date of my mom and dad's anniversary so at that time I didn't know that tomorrow was my parents' anniversary.

The verbs 'forget' and 'don't know' should be in the past tense 'forgot' and 'didn't know' to match the past time frame. Also, possessive forms 'mom and dad's' and 'parents'' are needed for correct grammar.

× Everyone posted in social media like I when I wake up and I open my mobile phone then I saw everyone who sits there.

✓ Everyone posted on social media, like I did when I woke up and opened my mobile phone; then I saw everyone who was there.

The correct preposition is 'on social media' not 'in social media'. Also, verb tenses are adjusted to past tense to maintain consistency, and sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I need to remember in my daily life and special moment and my parents special things like I have to do these things, these things I have to reading, I have to work and I want umm to memorize all, not all things, but memorize what important to me.

✓ I need to remember special moments and my parents' special things in my daily life. For example, I have to do certain things, like reading and working, and I want to memorize not all things, but what is important to me.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Reordering and restructuring the sentence improves coherence and grammatical correctness, including possessive forms and verb usage.

× I remember important things like I write in my notebook or in my mobile phone notes and some things I Remember Remember myself also.

✓ I remember important things by writing them in my notebook or in my mobile phone notes, and sometimes I remember them myself as well.

The sentence had repetition and unclear pronoun references. Adding 'by writing them' clarifies the method, and correcting pronoun usage improves clarity.

× But sometimes I forget some things so I write in my notebook with with is my personal diary so.

✓ But sometimes I forget some things, so I write them in my notebook, which is my personal diary.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repetition ('with with'). Correcting it to a complete sentence with proper relative clause improves clarity and grammar.