Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Since I graduated, I've had a lot on my mind, so I find it harder to focus and remember things as well as before.

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用错误，表达不够清晰，且重复。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地表达观点。

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, but I can't recall exactly what it was. However, I have a feeling that I missed something important.

Suggestion: 回答较为具体，但表达略显口语化，建议使用更正式的表达方式，并适当扩展细节。

Example: I need to remember to feed my cats every day and give them their vitamins. Additionally, I make sure to take my own vitamins daily to stay healthy.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子。

Example: As I mentioned earlier, my memory isn't as good as before, so I usually rely on my phone to help me remember important tasks. I add reminders to an app whenever I need to complete something.

× I don't think my memory is good as before.

✓ I don't think my memory is as good as before.

这里缺少了比较结构中的'as'，正确的表达是'as good as'，表示和以前一样好。

× After I graduated is just too much.

✓ After I graduated, it was just too much.

句子缺少主语和谓语，应该加上'it was'来构成完整句子，表示过去发生的事情。

× Things caught up my mind so I cannot focus like before.

✓ Things caught up with my mind so I cannot focus like before.

动词短语是'catch up with'，表示事情压在脑海里，缺少介词'with'导致表达不完整。

× I think I had forgot something important, but you know, I just can't remember it now.

✓ I think I had forgotten something important, but you know, I just can't remember it now.

'forgot'是过去式，过去完成时应使用过去分词'forgotten'。

× But my mind told me I did forgot something.

✓ But my mind told me I did forget something.

助动词'did'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'forgot'。

× On the top of my head, I need to feed my cats every day and give them vitamins, and I need to remember to give myself vitamins.

✓ Off the top of my head, I need to feed my cats every day and give them vitamins, and I need to remember to give myself vitamins.

习惯用语是'off the top of my head'，表示凭记忆说出，'on the top of my head'是不正确的表达。

× so I tend to use my phone to help me to remember things.

✓ so I tend to use my phone to help me remember things.

动词'help'后面接动词时，通常省略'to'，直接用动词原形。

× Every time I I need to finish something I will added on my app.

✓ Every time I need to finish something I will add it on my app.

'added'是过去式，句中应使用将来时'will add'，且缺少宾语'it'。