Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency by using correct verb forms and avoiding filler words. Also, make the answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and supporting it with a reason.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get distracted and forget what I was supposed to do if I don't focus.

Suggestion: Use clearer sentence structures and correct verb tenses. Avoid redundancy and filler words. Use linking words to make the story coherent and add specific details to enrich the answer.

Example: Yes, once I drove to work and parked my car, but after finishing work, I took the train home instead of my car. When I arrived home, I realized I had left my car at the office, which made me feel quite embarrassed.

Suggestion: Improve sentence fluency and vocabulary by using more precise expressions. Correct minor grammatical errors and avoid repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Example: In my daily life, the main thing I need to remember is to take my medication every morning to control my blood pressure.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and use complete sentences. Avoid filler words and improve coherence by using linking words. Explain your methods clearly with specific examples.

Example: It depends. If the task is not frequent, I usually write it in my calendar to remind myself. However, if it's a daily routine, I rely on my regular schedule to remember it easily.

× No, actually I'm not good in memorize things.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'memorize' should be in the gerund form 'memorizing' after 'good at'.

× No, actually I'm not good in memorize things.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form, so 'memorize' becomes 'memorizing'.

× Sometimes I'm just getting lost, uh, and I need to think what I I was going to do.

✓ Sometimes I just get lost, uh, and I need to think about what I was going to do.

The phrase 'I'm just getting lost' is better expressed as 'I just get lost' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'think' should be followed by 'about' when referring to considering something.

× So if I not focus on what I'm doing, I forget it really easy.

✓ So if I don't focus on what I'm doing, I forget it really easily.

The negative form of 'do' is required here: 'don't focus'. Also, 'easy' should be the adverb 'easily' to modify the verb 'forget'.

× Yes, I forgot one day I went to to work, uh, I drove to work by car and then when I finish work, I took the train home instead of my car.

✓ Yes, I forgot one day I went to work, uh, I drove to work by car and then when I finished work, I took the train home instead of my car.

The verb 'finish' should be in the past tense 'finished' to maintain consistency with the past narrative.

× So as until I get arrived home, I realized that I left my Canada car park at the office.

✓ So when I arrived home, I realized that I left my car in the Canada car park at the office.

The phrase 'as until I get arrived' is incorrect; 'when I arrived' is appropriate. Also, 'left my Canada car park' is unclear; it should be 'left my car in the Canada car park'. The preposition 'in' is used for parking locations.

× So as until I get arrived home, I realized that I left my Canada car park at the office.

✓ So when I arrived home, I realized that I left my car in the Canada car park at the office.

The verb 'get arrived' is incorrect; the simple past 'arrived' is correct here.

× So I felt a little bit embarrassed because I had completely forgot about it.

✓ So I felt a little bit embarrassed because I had completely forgotten about it.

The past perfect form of 'forget' is 'forgotten', not 'forgot'.

× I take pill every morning for for the pressures.

✓ I take pills every morning for the pressure.

'Pill' should be plural 'pills' if more than one is taken regularly. Also, 'pressures' is incorrect; 'pressure' is uncountable in this context.

× Depends, uh, If it's something uh doesn't help, often I need to put uh in my calendar to to remember.

✓ Depends, uh, if it's something that doesn't help, often I need to put it in my calendar to remember.

The phrase 'something uh doesn't help' is missing 'that' to connect the clause. Also, 'put uh in my calendar' needs the pronoun 'it' to specify what is being put in the calendar.

× But if it's something I need to do every day, umm, this just can easily my schedule.

✓ But if it's something I need to do every day, umm, this can easily fit into my schedule.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'fit into' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.