Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的で簡潔ですが、繰り返しの表現を避け、理由や具体例を加えることで説得力を高められます。また一文が長くならないように分け、接続詞を適切に使って流れを良くしましょう。

Example: Not really. I find it hard to memorise details, so I always take notes in a small notebook. This helps me review important points later and avoid forgetting tasks.

Suggestion: 答えは短く明確ですが、同じ語の繰り返しがあり、深さや具体性に欠けます。過去の具体的な例や理由を一つ示すことで信憑性が上がります。接続語で説明をつなげましょう。

Example: No, I haven't forgotten anything important recently. Because I rely on written notes and calendar reminders, I can check tasks easily and prevent major mistakes.

Suggestion: 主題文はあるが一般的で具体性が不足しています。どんな業務や具体的な優先順位の決め方を行うかを一例で示すと良いです。また文をもう一つ加えて理由を説明しましょう。

Example: At work I need to remember multiple tasks, such as client emails and project deadlines. I prioritise them by deadline and importance, handling urgent client requests first.

Suggestion: 方法は示されていますが、文が途中で途切れたり語の繰り返しがあるため自然さに欠けます。どのツールを使うか、どのように整理するかなど具体的な方法や利点を付け加えて話を完結させてください。

Example: I usually take notes or use memo apps on my PC to list tasks. For example, I create daily checklists and set reminders so I don't miss deadlines.

× No, I'm not, so I usually take notes to remember what I should do.

✓ No, I'm not, so I usually take notes to remember what I need to do.

The verb phrase 'should do' expresses obligation or recommendation rather than a neutral present need. 'Need to' is more natural here to indicate something required in the present; also it matches the present tense context. Suggestion: use 'need to' for present necessities (I need to do), not 'should do' for obligation or advice.

× No I haven't. I I usually remember things because of taking notes.

✓ No, I haven't. I usually remember things because I take notes.

Redundancy of 'I' aside, 'because of taking notes' is an unnatural noun phrase. Use the simple present 'I take notes' to explain habitual action that causes remembering; the present perfect in 'No, I haven't' is fine. Suggestion: describe habitual causes with present simple: 'I usually remember things because I take notes.'

× In my work there are many tasks which I have to deal with and I should decide priority.

✓ In my work there are many tasks that I have to deal with and I should decide priorities.

'Which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural in defining clauses here. More importantly, 'priority' in this context needs to be plural 'priorities' because there are many tasks requiring multiple priorities. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and prefer 'that' for defining relative clauses: 'tasks that I have to deal with' and 'decide priorities.'

× I usually take notes or use memos on PC to list what to do and I. I.

✓ I usually take notes or use memos on my PC to list what to do.

The original has fragmented repetition 'and I. I.' and lacks 'my' before 'PC.' Also 'memos on PC' is unnatural; use 'memos on my PC' or 'on my computer.' Remove the incomplete fragment. Suggestion: complete the sentence with appropriate possessive and remove repetitions: 'use memos on my PC.'