Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문법과 시제 사용이 일관되지 않고 반복과 불명확한 표현이 많습니다. 답변은 직접적인 주제문(예: "No, I'm not very good at memorising things.")으로 시작하고, 이어서 이유와 구체적인 예를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 중복 단어를 제거하고, 시제는 현재 능력 설명에는 현재형을 사용하세요. 또한 ‘histories’ 대신 구체적으로 ‘historical dates’나 ‘history facts’처럼 정확한 단어를 쓰면 더 좋습니다.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often struggle to remember historical dates for my exams, which made studying stressful. As a result, I've tried using mnemonic techniques to help retain facts.

Suggestion: 문장이 반복되고 어순이 어색합니다. 질문엔 직접적으로 'Yes' 또는 'No'로 답한 뒤, 하나의 구체적 사건을 간결하게 설명하세요. 사건의 결과(친구가 슬펐다)는 한 문장으로 정리하고, 이유나 어떻게 느꼈는지도 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 예를 들어 시간 표현과 한 번의 사건 서술로 구성하세요.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once I forgot my friend's birthday, and she was really upset because I didn't even send a message. I felt guilty afterwards and decided to set reminders so it wouldn't happen again.

Suggestion: 답변이 반복적이고 구체성이 부족합니다. 먼저 핵심 문장으로 시작하세요 (예: "I need to remember my daily schedule and appointments."). 이어서 어떤 종류의 일정을 기억해야 하는지(예: 수업, 회의, 약속)나 우선순위 정하는 방법 등 구체적 예시를 한두 개 제시하면 내용이 풍부해집니다.

Example: I need to remember my daily schedule and appointments. For instance, I keep track of my classes, work meetings and grocery shopping, and I prioritise urgent tasks in the morning so I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: 문장이 어색하고 단어 선택이 부정확합니다('mean' 사용 등). 방법은 간단명료하게 말하고, 사용 도구와 구체적인 방식(예: 알람 설정, 캘린더 색상 구분)을 추가해 보세요. 문장은 현재 습관을 말하므로 현재형으로 일관되게 표현하세요.

Example: I usually save important information on my phone and use my calendar app. For example, I set reminders and colour-code events so I get a notification an hour before each appointment.

× I was struggling.

✓ I struggled.

The speaker uses past continuous 'was struggling' which implies an ongoing action at a specific past time; the context describes a past habit or general past difficulty, so simple past 'struggled' is more appropriate. Use simple past for completed or habitual actions in the past (I struggled).

× I always had struggled with with memorizing the histories.

✓ I have always struggled with memorizing history.

The original has incorrect word order and double 'with', and mixes past perfect 'had struggled' with 'always' inappropriately. Present perfect 'have struggled' suits an experience continuing to present; 'history' is uncountable here. Remove duplicate word and correct noun form. Suggestion: 'I have always struggled with memorizing history.'

× So I don't like, I didn't like that.

✓ So I don't like it; I didn't like that.

Sentence mixes present 'don't like' with past 'didn't like' without clear referent. Add object 'it' after 'like' and separate clauses; keep both if contrasting present and past feelings. Use punctuation and explicit object for clarity.

× There are several situation that I forgot the important things, but one thing, the one thing that comes to my mind first is that when I when I forgot my friend's birthday and she was very sad that for that.

✓ There are several situations when I forgot important things, but the first that comes to mind is when I forgot my friend's birthday and she was very sad about it.

Use plural 'situations' to match 'several'. Remove 'the' before 'important things' and use 'about it' to express cause of sadness. Simplify repetition and fix word order. 'Comes to my mind' -> 'comes to mind'.

× MMM. These days I have to do so much things every day, and I have to organize my calendar, so the daily planning, I have to remember the daily plans.

✓ These days I have to do so many things every day, and I have to organize my calendar, so I have to plan my days and remember my daily tasks.

Use 'many' with countable 'things' not 'much'. Avoid repetition 'daily planning' then 'daily plans'; use clearer phrasing 'plan my days' and 'daily tasks'. Ensure verbs match present tense 'have to'.

× I always mean not about them.

✓ I don't always think about them.

Original 'mean' is incorrect verb; use 'think about' to express remembering or considering. Also adjust negation placement: 'I don't always' rather than 'I always mean not'.

× I always keep them on my phone and my on my cale calendar to remember the important things.

✓ I always keep them on my phone and on my calendar to remember important things.

Remove duplicate 'my on my', correct 'cale' to 'calendar', and use 'on' with 'phone' and 'calendar'. Omit 'the' before 'important things' for general reference.