Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'really stress' nên là 'relieve stress', 'sing my ferry' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Absolutely, I love singing because it helps me relax after a long, hectic day of walking and studying. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, it lifts my spirits and makes me feel more positive and refreshed. Singing is a great way to relieve stress and improve my mood. I feel on cloud nine when I can sing my favorite tunes.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên câu đầu hơi lặp lại câu hỏi và có thể ngắn gọn hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I have never formally learned how to sing because it is just a hobby for me. However, I find singing relaxing and it helps me feel comfortable. Moreover, I think learning to sing properly is quite challenging and more suitable for people who are really passionate about it.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'the one' nên là 'the ones', 'my type of singing' có thể nói rõ hơn). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn để tăng tính tự nhiên.

Example: I would love to sing for my parents because they are the ones who usually sing for me. They always appreciate my style of singing and the genre of music I enjoy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'will will', 'it beats the lyrics' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

Example: Of course, singing or any form of art has the ultimate purpose of connecting people. I believe that singing can bring happiness through its melodies, beats, and meaningful lyrics, all of which can touch people's hearts.

× Singing is a great way to really stress and improve my mood.

✓ Singing is a great way to really relieve stress and improve my mood.

The verb 'stress' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'relieve stress' or 'reduce stress'. Using 'stress' as a verb in this context is incorrect. The suggestion is to use 'relieve stress' to convey the intended meaning.

× I will be on cloud 9 if I can sing my ferry.

✓ I will be on cloud nine if I can sing my favorite song.

The phrase 'on cloud 9' is an idiom meaning very happy, but 'ferry' is incorrect here. It seems the student meant 'favorite song'. Also, 'cloud nine' is usually written as words. The correction adjusts the phrase to a proper idiom and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Ever learned how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense, which is required for 'ever' questions about experience. The correction adds 'Have you' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× This is because they are the one who usually sing for me and they usually appreciate my type of singing, my genre of music.

✓ This is because they are the ones who usually sing for me and they usually appreciate my type of singing, my genre of music.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the predicate should agree in number. 'One' should be pluralized to 'ones' to match 'they'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Of course, singing or any form of art will will have the ultimate purpose of connecting.

✓ Of course, singing or any form of art will have the ultimate purpose of connecting.

There is a repeated modal verb 'will will'. The correction removes the duplicate to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× So I believe that singing can bring happiness to people with its melodies, it beats the lyrics, all of them can bring people.

✓ So I believe that singing can bring happiness to people with its melodies, beats, and lyrics; all of them can bring joy to people.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It beats the lyrics' is incorrect; likely intended 'beats and lyrics'. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, connecting ideas properly and using appropriate conjunctions.