Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构来表达你的意思，同时避免重复和冗长。可以先直接回答喜欢唱歌，然后简要说明原因和经历。

Example: Yes, I like singing because I have been encouraged by my parents since childhood. I participated in many singing competitions at primary school and won several awards.

Suggestion: 回答时应更清晰地表达学习唱歌的经历，避免语句不连贯。可以先直接回答是否学过唱歌，然后具体说明参加合唱团和表演的经历，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing by joining the choir in my primary school. We were a small group of girls who sang and danced together, and we performed many times.

Suggestion: 回答中有很多犹豫和重复，建议提前组织语言，直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，避免使用不确定的词汇。

Example: I want to sing for my grandma because she enjoys listening to old songs, and I like to share those memories with her.

Suggestion: 回答应更简洁明了，避免语法错误和不连贯的表达。可以直接表达唱歌带来快乐的观点，并用具体理由支持。

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because the lyrics and melody can touch people's hearts and help them relax and feel joyful.

× Yeah, I'm like seeing because from my childhood my parents have improved disability to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competition in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

✓ Yeah, I like singing because since my childhood my parents have encouraged me to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competitions in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

这里的错误是动词后面错误地使用了动名词形式。'like seeing' 应改为 'like singing'，因为 'singing' 是动名词，表示喜欢唱歌。

× Yeah, I'm like seeing because from my childhood my parents have improved disability to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competition in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

✓ Yeah, I like singing because since my childhood my parents have encouraged me to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competitions in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

'singing competition' 应该用复数形式 'singing competitions'，因为这里指的是多个比赛。

× Yeah, I'm like seeing because from my childhood my parents have improved disability to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competition in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

✓ Yeah, I like singing because since my childhood my parents have encouraged me to cultivate it and I have joined a lot of singing competitions in my primary school, and I also got many rewards.

'have improved disability' 语义不通，应该是 'have encouraged me'，使用现在完成时表示从过去到现在的持续行为。

× I have joined the choir in my primary school, so I have learned about how to sing. Firstly, I joined the group scene. It's just a small group, a few girls together. We sing and dance and then we have performance many times at that time.

✓ I joined the choir in my primary school, so I learned how to sing. Firstly, I joined the group scene. It was just a small group, a few girls together. We sang and danced and then we had performances many times at that time.

描述过去的动作时，应该使用一般过去时，如 'joined', 'learned', 'was', 'sang', 'danced', 'had'，而不是现在完成时。

× I have joined the choir in my primary school, so I have learned about how to sing.

✓ I joined the choir in my primary school, so I learned how to sing.

'learned about how to sing' 中 'about' 是多余的，正确表达是 'learned how to sing'。

× A lot of uh, for example, I want, I want to sing for my grandma. Uh, she's really like to hear about my seeing the songs about, uh, some old, old, old songs. And I also really like to think about it.

✓ For example, I want to sing for my grandma. She really likes to hear me sing old songs. And I also really like to think about it.

'she's really like to hear about my seeing' 中 'she's' 应为 'she', 'like' 应为 'likes', 'hear about my seeing' 结构错误，应该是 'hear me sing'。

× She's really like to hear about my seeing the songs about, uh, some old, old, old songs.

✓ She really likes to hear me sing some old songs.

'really like' 应为 'really likes'，因为主语是第三人称单数。

× Yeah, definitely the thing they conclude the lyrics and refine as well to attract people to hearing about that and to release a kind of, uh, dough palming that's make you happy.

✓ Yeah, definitely, the lyrics convey feelings and attract people to listen to them and release a kind of dopamine that makes you happy.

'attract people to hearing about that' 中 'to hearing about' 用法错误，应该是 'to listen to'。

× Yeah, definitely the thing they conclude the lyrics and refine as well to attract people to hearing about that and to release a kind of, uh, dough palming that's make you happy.

✓ Yeah, definitely, the lyrics convey feelings and attract people to listen to them and release a kind of dopamine that makes you happy.

'the thing they conclude the lyrics' 语义不清，改为 'the lyrics convey feelings' 更准确。

× Yeah, definitely the thing they conclude the lyrics and refine as well to attract people to hearing about that and to release a kind of, uh, dough palming that's make you happy.

✓ Yeah, definitely, the lyrics convey feelings and attract people to listen to them and release a kind of dopamine that makes you happy.

'that's make you happy' 中 'that' 是单数，动词应为 'makes'，保持主谓一致。

× So seeing is actually a great activity for people to enjoy about at the moment.

✓ So singing is actually a great activity for people to enjoy at the moment.

'enjoy about' 是错误搭配，'enjoy' 后面不加 'about'。