Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but a bit unclear and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid redundancy. Also, explain the legacy more clearly to make your answer more effective.

Example: Yes, I love singing because I grew up in a musical family. When I was young, I attended a specialized music school called Channel, which helped me develop my skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'when I was child' should be 'when I was a child'.

Example: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child. First, a teacher came to give me lessons at home, and later I joined a music school where I studied for one year.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and correct grammar such as 'everyone who really appreciate' should be 'everyone who really appreciates'.

Example: I don't have a specific person in mind, but I enjoy singing for my loved ones, like my parents and partner. Also, I like to sing for anyone who truly appreciates good music.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'a person heart' should be 'a person's heart'.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it connects directly to a person's heart and brain. When people sing, it can improve their mood and make them feel joyful.

× I was a a student of Channel, a specialized school for music, and my family background was connected with music.

✓ I was a student of Channel, a specialized school for music, and my family background was connected with music.

The sentence contains a repeated article 'a a' which is incorrect. Only one article 'a' is needed before 'student'. This is a common typographical error and should be corrected to improve clarity.

× Yes, I learned singing when I was child.

✓ Yes, I learned singing when I was a child.

The noun 'child' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× There was a teacher who used to come to give lesson and after that I admitted to a music school and there I learnt music for one year.

✓ There was a teacher who used to come to give lessons and after that I was admitted to a music school and there I learnt music for one year.

The word 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' because it refers to multiple sessions. Also, 'I admitted to a music school' is incorrect; the passive form 'I was admitted' is needed to indicate that the school admitted the student. These corrections fix the preposition and verb form errors.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

In formal English, 'whom' is the correct object pronoun to use after a preposition like 'for'. Although 'who' is commonly used in speech, 'whom' is grammatically correct here.

× There is no specific person that I would like to sing for, but yes, I love to sing for my loved ones, sometimes my parents or my partner.

✓ There is no specific person for whom I would like to sing, but yes, I love to sing for my loved ones, sometimes my parents or my partner.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate after a preposition. Using 'for whom' is more formal and grammatically correct. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Moreover, I love to sing to everyone who really appreciate the music and have good tasting it.

✓ Moreover, I love to sing to everyone who really appreciates music and has good taste in it.

The verb 'appreciate' should be in third person singular 'appreciates' to agree with 'everyone'. 'Have good tasting it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'has good taste in it'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and adjective usage.

× Yes, I really think it has a special quality to make a person happy because it's directly connected to a person heart and brain.

✓ Yes, I really think it has a special quality that makes a person happy because it's directly connected to a person's heart and brain.

The phrase 'to make a person happy' should be 'that makes a person happy' to correctly link the clause. Also, 'a person heart' should be 'a person's heart' to show possession. These changes improve sentence structure and possessive form.

× Both functions are really good and whenever singing happens.

✓ Both functions are really good, and singing always happens.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Whenever singing happens' is a dependent clause without a main clause. Changing it to 'singing always happens' completes the sentence and improves clarity.