Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng từ sai và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ.

Example: No, I don't really like singing because I am an introvert and feel nervous singing in front of many people.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'I think'.

Example: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I plan to learn in the future because it will help me relax after studying for many hours.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: If I had to choose, I would like to sing for my mom because she often sings in front of many people, and I want to make her proud and happy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác và nói rõ ý hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves. For example, in Vietnam, there are programs that use singing to entertain audiences.

× Well, not really because I'm introvert so I'm not scared on singing, especially in front of many people or crowded.

✓ Well, not really because I'm an introvert so I'm not scared of singing, especially in front of many people or a crowd.

The word 'introvert' is a noun and needs an article 'an' before it. The phrase 'scared on singing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'scared of singing'. Also, 'crowded' is an adjective and does not fit here; 'a crowd' (noun) is appropriate to describe many people gathered.

× Well, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I think I will learn how to sing in the future when I have time because I think it will help me restart after many hours of study.

✓ Well, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I think I will learn how to sing in the future when I have time because I think it will help me relax after many hours of study.

The word 'restart' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'relax' or 'refresh'. 'Restart' means to start again, which does not fit the context of taking a break after studying.

× Wow, in my opinion if I have to choose one, I would like to sing in front of my mom because she always she sing in front of many people and I want to make her proud of me. I want to make her smile.

✓ Wow, in my opinion, if I had to choose one, I would like to sing in front of my mom because she always sings in front of many people and I want to make her proud of me. I want to make her smile.

The phrase 'if I have to choose' should be 'if I had to choose' to express a hypothetical situation. The repetition 'she always she sing' is incorrect; it should be 'she always sings' with the third person singular verb form. Also, 'make her proud of me' is correct but could be more natural as 'make her proud'.

× What? In my opinion, yes, of course, because singing is always bring the good thing to many people, especially some can help speakers. Uh, this is in Vietnam, there are few program that has singing to raise the fun.

✓ What? In my opinion, yes, of course, because singing always brings good things to many people, especially it can help speakers. Uh, here in Vietnam, there are a few programs that have singing to raise the fun.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'The good thing' should be plural 'good things' to match the context. 'Some can help speakers' is unclear; 'it can help speakers' is clearer. 'There are few program' should be 'there are a few programs' to indicate some exist. 'Has singing' should be 'have singing' to agree with plural 'programs'.