Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy singing), then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid fillers, repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "singing will make me relax", "I go to karaoke twice a month"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing. I usually go to a local karaoke bar twice a month because singing helps me relax after a busy week, and I often meet friends there to unwind.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your view (however, although). Avoid word repetition and incorrect word order (e.g., "I haven't taken singing lessons" rather than "No, I did not").

Example: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons. Although I don't have a trained voice, I prefer to sing naturally because it feels more comfortable and personal to me.

Suggestion: This answer is unclear and contains confusing references. First, directly state who you sing for (yourself, friends, family). Then add a brief specific detail about the music you choose. Avoid unclear abbreviations and correct sentence structure.

Example: I usually sing for my friends at karaoke nights because we enjoy singing popular Mandarin pop songs together. When I walk home, I often listen to Mandopop, which is what I like to perform.

Suggestion: Give a concise opinion and support it with one clear reason and a short example. Avoid hesitations and repetition (e.g., "music is a universal tool"). Use smoother linking words and correct grammar ("music helps people connect across languages").

Example: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because music is a universal language that brings people together. For example, at karaoke nights people from different backgrounds often bond by singing the same songs.

× I think singing will makes me relax.

✓ I think singing will make me relax.

The modal 'will' must be followed by the base form of the verb, not the third person singular 'makes.' Use 'make' after 'will.' Suggestion: Use the base form after modal verbs (will + verb).

× When I wanna unwind myself, I will go to I will sing.

✓ When I want to unwind, I will go and sing.

'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to.' 'Unwind myself' is redundant — 'unwind' is sufficient. The original has an incorrect structure 'I will go to I will sing.' Use 'go and sing' or 'go to sing.' Suggestion: Use 'want to' in formal contexts and avoid redundant reflexive pronouns.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past participles; choose 'learned' for American English. The sentence itself is grammatically correct in present perfect, but standardizing to 'learned' may be preferred depending on variety. Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms according to the chosen English variety.

× No, I did not because I think the singing is natural.

✓ No, I did not because I think singing is natural.

The definite article 'the' before 'singing' makes it specific; here 'singing' is a general activity, so no article is needed. Suggestion: Do not use 'the' with uncountable or general activities unless referring to something specific.

× Even though I don't have a good voice to sing, I love to use my natural voice and without any techniques technical.

✓ Even though I don't have a good voice to sing, I love to use my natural voice without any technical techniques.

The phrase 'without any techniques technical' has incorrect word order and redundancy. 'Technical' is an adjective and must come before the noun 'techniques.' Also 'technical techniques' is repetitive; better: 'without any technique' or 'without any vocal technique.' Suggestion: Place adjectives before nouns and avoid redundant wording; use 'without any technique' or 'without any vocal technique.'

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

The sentence is correct as written; no correction necessary. (No change made.)

× I like the RMB music so I will choose this type of music here when I mean karaoke and I usually listen to RM not MB when I walk home.

✓ I like R&B music, so I choose that style when I go to karaoke, and I usually listen to R&B, not MB, when I walk home.

Multiple problems: 'RMB' likely intended 'R&B' (genre). 'I will choose this type of music here when I mean karaoke' is unclear and ungrammatical; use 'I choose that style when I go to karaoke.' Tense consistency: present simple for habitual actions. Also punctuation/abbreviation clarity: 'R&B' is the common form, and 'MB' is unclear; left as 'MB' per original but corrected placement. Suggestion: Use clear genre names, keep consistent tense for habitual actions (present simple), and simplify sentence structure.

× Yeah, sure, definitely 'cause I think music is a traditional, uh, it's a tool to connect different people who use different languages in the world and music is has the image to make people understand.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I think music is a traditional tool to connect people who speak different languages, and music helps people understand each other.

Removed colloquial filler and corrected articles: 'a traditional, uh, it's a tool' was redundant and ungrammatical. 'Who use different languages' is better as 'who speak different languages.' 'Music is has the image to make people understand' is ungrammatical; use 'music helps people understand each other.' Suggestion: Eliminate filler words, use correct relative clauses ('who speak different languages'), and choose clear verbs ('help' + object) for clarity.