List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'that time' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and try to use more varied vocabulary.

Example: I don't always make a list when I shop. For myself, I usually remember what I need, so I just buy it directly. However, when shopping for my family or relatives, I prefer to make a list because it's harder to remember everything.

Suggestion: Your response needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary by replacing phrases like 'hard task' with 'difficult tasks'.

Example: I don't always make a list for work, but when I have difficult tasks, I use one because it helps me complete my work efficiently. For simpler tasks, I usually don't need a list.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because their tasks are not very complicated. However, people with complex work often make lists to stay organized, especially when shopping.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use correct tenses and singular/plural forms. Also, use linking words to compare options smoothly.

Example: I prefer both methods. In the past, people commonly made lists on paper. However, nowadays, many prefer using their phones because it's easier to carry and always with them. Therefore, I think using a phone is better.

× When I buy something for me, that time I don't make a list.

✓ When I buy something for myself, I don't make a list.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here because it is an object pronoun used incorrectly as a reflexive pronoun. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself' when referring back to the subject 'I'.

× when I buy something about my family and other relatives, that time I make a list

✓ when I buy something for my family and other relatives, I make a list

The preposition 'about' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate the beneficiary of the action is 'for'.

× when I have an hard task that time I use my list

✓ when I have a hard task, I use my list

The article 'an' is used before vowel sounds, but 'hard' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' is correct. Also, the sentence is improved by adding a comma and removing 'that time' for clarity.

× But most of the time I have not hard as easy task have not used list.

✓ But most of the time, when I have an easy task, I do not use a list.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It needs restructuring to clearly express that the speaker does not use a list when tasks are easy.

× I think most of the people don't have all this hard task.

✓ I think most people don't have such hard tasks.

'Most of the people' is less natural than 'most people'. 'All this hard task' is incorrect; 'such hard tasks' is the correct quantifier and plural form.

× One people have a very complex work that time they make a list and use it for their for their buying something that's.

✓ Some people have very complex work; at that time, they make a list and use it for their buying needs.

'One people' is incorrect; 'some people' or 'one person' is correct. 'Work' is uncountable, so 'very complex work' is correct. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× Few tickets ago people are make a list in paper, it's a common way.

✓ A few decades ago, people made lists on paper; it was a common way.

'Few tickets ago' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'a few decades ago'. 'People are make' is incorrect; past tense 'made' is needed. Also, 'in paper' should be 'on paper'.

× But nowadays individual are make a list in mobile because it's easy to carry and it's always people carry with them.

✓ But nowadays, individuals make lists on mobile phones because they are easy to carry and people always carry them with them.

'Individual are make' is incorrect; correct is 'individuals make'. 'In mobile' should be 'on mobile phones'. Pronouns are corrected for agreement and clarity.