List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "I would like to say" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I mostly shop online. I just browse through the variety of groceries and pick what I need.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper linking words and avoid repetition. Also, use simpler sentence structures to improve clarity.

Example: Sometimes I make a list for work because I have goals and sales targets. Making a list helps me manage my tasks and stay on schedule.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks fluency and contains filler words like "umm." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases like "just like that."

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's useless. However, lists can help you understand what tasks you need to do and keep you organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use comparative structures correctly and avoid awkward phrases like "takes not so much time."

Example: I usually make lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. I don't keep a pen nearby since I do almost everything on my phone.

× I would like to say that I don't do a list when I shop because in most cases I do shopping online and I'm just looking the variety of some grocery and pick up that I want, that's all.

✓ I would like to say that I don't make a list when I shop because in most cases I shop online and I just look at the variety of groceries and pick up what I want, that's all.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. Also, 'do shopping' is better expressed as 'shop'. The verb 'looking' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to viewing something. 'Some grocery' should be pluralized to 'groceries' to refer to multiple items. 'Pick up that I want' should be 'pick up what I want' to correctly express the object of the action.

× Sometimes I do because when I work I have some goals and sales that I need to do and I if I want to be on time and I want to manage with them, I need to understand what I need to do and of course if I don't have list of them I won't do that.

✓ Sometimes I do because when I work I have some goals and sales that I need to achieve and if I want to be on time and manage them, I need to understand what I need to do and of course if I don't have a list of them I won't do that.

The phrase 'manage with them' is incorrect; the correct form is 'manage them' without 'with'. Also, 'have list of them' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. The phrase 'need to do' is better replaced with 'need to achieve' when referring to goals and sales.

× It's really obvious because most of people think that it's useless, but sometimes making lists can be very, umm, good for your understanding.

✓ It's really obvious because most people think that it's useless, but sometimes making lists can be very, umm, good for your understanding.

The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; the correct form is 'most people' without 'of' when referring to a general group.

× In most cases I make a list on my phone because it takes not so much time as on paper.

✓ In most cases I make a list on my phone because it takes less time than on paper.

The phrase 'takes not so much time as' is awkward and incorrect. The correct comparative form is 'takes less time than' to compare two things.