List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm go' và dùng từ phù hợp hơn như 'sometimes' thay vì 'sometime'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, sometimes when I go grocery shopping with my mother, I make a list of items I need. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary things and saves money.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'look forward to do' không đúng ngữ pháp, nên dùng 'plan to do' hoặc 'focus on'. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'have to' nhiều lần và sửa lỗi số nhiều của 'homeworks' thành 'homework'.

Example: Yes, especially when I study, I make a list of tasks to plan my work effectively. This helps me avoid difficulties, particularly during exam weeks.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu bằng liên từ và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chắc chắn như 'umm'.

Example: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they can remember everything in their minds. Also, they might find making lists time-consuming and prefer other methods to stay organized.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, 'bring up first' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'take with me'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi như 'open though app notes' và 'list out of the thing'.

Example: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry my smartphone. It's more convenient to use a notes app than to bring pen and paper.

× Yeah, sometime, like when I'm go to the grocery, help my mother, I always have to list what I want to buy.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, like when I go to the grocery store to help my mother, I always have to list what I want to buy.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'I'm go' is incorrect; it should be 'I go' because 'go' is the base form after 'I'. Also, 'grocery' should be 'grocery store' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× That is the way that can help me to reduce the percentage of buying some unnecessary things when shopping.

✓ That is the way that can help me reduce the number of unnecessary things I buy when shopping.

The phrase 'reduce the percentage of buying' is awkward. It is better to say 'reduce the number of unnecessary things I buy'. Also, 'percentage' is not appropriate here; 'number' fits better for countable items.

× Yes, when I'm doing something, especially studying, I always have to list down what I'm going to do so I can look forward to do without having any challenges and barriers when I'm doing homeworks, especially in some examination week.

✓ Yes, when I'm doing something, especially studying, I always have to list down what I'm going to do so I can look forward to doing it without having any challenges or barriers when I'm doing homework, especially during exam weeks.

The phrase 'look forward to do' is incorrect; after 'look forward to' we use the '-ing' form, so 'doing' is correct. 'Homeworks' is uncountable and should be 'homework'. 'In some examination week' should be 'during exam weeks' for natural expression.

× I think that they already organized all the information in their head, so making list is do not is does not umm essential for them.

✓ I think that they have already organized all the information in their heads, so making a list is not essential for them.

'Organized' should be present perfect 'have organized' to indicate completed action relevant to now. 'Their head' should be plural 'their heads' because 'they' is plural. The phrase 'making list is do not is does not umm essential' is incorrect and should be 'making a list is not essential'.

× So maybe they can use something much more useful and instead of just making a list.

✓ So maybe they can use something much more useful instead of just making a list.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used before 'instead of'. 'Instead of' should directly connect the alternatives without 'and'.

× It's really time consuming sometimes.

✓ It's really time-consuming sometimes.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or as a predicate adjective.

× Absolutely my phone because when I go out my smartphone, one of the things that I always bring up first.

✓ Absolutely my phone because when I go out, my smartphone is one of the things that I always bring with me first.

The phrase 'when I go out my smartphone' is missing a comma and verb; it should be 'when I go out, my smartphone is...'. 'Bring up' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'bring with me'.

× So if I want to make a list, like when shopping or doing something actually open though app notes to list out of the thing I want to do, it's much more convenient than bring a pen and a paper.

✓ So if I want to make a list, like when shopping or doing something, I actually open the Notes app to list out the things I want to do. It's much more convenient than bringing a pen and paper.

The sentence is missing subjects and has incorrect prepositions. 'Open though app notes' should be 'open the Notes app'. 'List out of the thing' should be 'list out the things'. 'Than bring a pen and a paper' should be 'than bringing a pen and paper'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here.