List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "go to shopping" (should be "go shopping") and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy only what I need. For example, two weeks ago, I forgot to make a list and ended up purchasing unnecessary items, which was wasteful.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Avoid run-on sentences and unclear phrases like "couples ago couple 2 days ago I didn't prudent my due list." Use linking words to organise your ideas logically and be specific about how the list helps you.

Example: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning when I arrive at work. It helps me focus and complete my tasks efficiently. For instance, two days ago, I forgot to prepare my list and found it harder to stay organised.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. For example, instead of "walk versatile," you might say "be more flexible." Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility. For example, my friend prefers to work spontaneously rather than following a strict to-do list, which she feels can be restrictive.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organise your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference and reasons effectively.

Example: I prefer to write my to-do list on paper and stick it on my desk because it helps me stay focused. Using my phone can be distracting due to notifications, so paper works better for me.

× For instance, 2 weeks ago I went to shopping from work and I ended up buying irrelevant things that I did not need.

✓ For instance, 2 weeks ago I went shopping from work and I ended up buying irrelevant things that I did not need.

The phrase 'went to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed directly by the verb in its base form when indicating an activity, so it should be 'went shopping'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here.

× Certainly I do when I arrive work, I pick my To Do List to write out the things that I need to finish before the end of the day and that enables me to work effectively and focus more on the things that I needed couples ago couple 2 days ago I didn't prudent my due list.

✓ Certainly I do. When I arrive at work, I pick up my To Do List to write out the things that I need to finish before the end of the day, and that enables me to work effectively and focus more on the things that I needed. A couple of days ago, I didn't update my To Do List.

Several issues: 'arrive work' requires the preposition 'at' to be correct; 'pick my To Do List' should be 'pick up my To Do List' as 'pick up' is the correct phrasal verb; the sentence was run-on and needed punctuation; 'needed couples ago couple 2 days ago' is unclear and corrected to 'A couple of days ago'; 'prudent my due list' is incorrect and corrected to 'update my To Do List' to convey the intended meaning.

× Certainly I do when I arrive work, I pick my To Do List to write out the things that I need to finish before the end of the day and that enables me to work effectively and focus more on the things that I needed couples ago couple 2 days ago I didn't prudent my due list.

✓ Certainly I do. When I arrive at work, I pick up my To Do List to write out the things that I need to finish before the end of the day, and that enables me to work effectively and focus more on the things that I needed. A couple of days ago, I didn't update my To Do List.

The phrase 'arrive work' is missing the preposition 'at'. Also, 'pick my To Do List' should be 'pick up my To Do List' as 'pick up' is the correct phrasal verb. Proper prepositions are essential for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Just like my friend told me that she believes to walk versatile than to make a list that will not make her to do the things that she needed.

✓ Just like my friend told me that she believes in being more versatile than making a list that would not help her do the things that she needs.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verb forms. 'Believes to walk versatile' is incorrect; it should be 'believes in being more versatile'. Also, 'make her to do' is incorrect; it should be 'help her do'. Pronouns and verb forms must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× Just like my friend told me that she believes to walk versatile than to make a list that will not make her to do the things that she needed.

✓ Just like my friend told me that she believes in being more versatile than making a list that would not help her do the things that she needs.

The phrase 'believes to walk versatile' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'believes in' followed by a gerund. Also, 'make her to do' is incorrect; it should be 'help her do'. Proper preposition use is necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× Phone will kind of distract me when going through it.

✓ The phone kind of distracts me when I go through it.

The original sentence lacks the definite article 'The' before 'phone' and uses 'will' unnecessarily. Also, 'when going through it' lacks a subject; it should be 'when I go through it'. Pronouns and subjects must be clear for correct sentence structure.

× Phone will kind of distract me when going through it.

✓ The phone kind of distracts me when I go through it.

The adverb phrase 'kind of' should be placed before the verb 'distracts' to modify it correctly. Also, the sentence needs a subject in the subordinate clause ('I') for clarity.

× Anytime I'm working my eyes go just to remember I have to do this but whatever I.

✓ Anytime I'm working, my eyes glance at it just to remind me that I have to do this, but sometimes I forget.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'My eyes go just to remember' is awkward; it should be 'my eyes glance at it just to remind me'. Also, 'but whatever I' is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to 'but sometimes I forget' to complete the thought.