Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Oh yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevent me from getting important items. It also allows me to keep track of my expenses and avoid overspending.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I usually make A to do list for my daily study because it helps me stay focused and organized. For example, I just write down all the tasks and then I complete things step by step.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
There are various reasons, and I think the most immediate factor is that it enhances people's productivity. People don't need to worry about what to do next, they just immerses themselves to try their best to do one thing.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's much more convenient and practical. For example, I can just aid or remove some items and time without need a pen or a paper, which saves time and keeps everything organized.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 你的回答内容较为完整,但有些表达不够自然,例如“prevent me from getting important items”应为“prevent me from forgetting important items”。建议注意用词准确性,并尝试使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items. Moreover, it allows me to keep track of my expenses and avoid overspending.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误,如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”。建议注意冠词使用和时态一致,同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my daily study because it helps me stay focused and organized. For example, I write down all the tasks and then complete them step by step.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中逻辑不清且有语法错误,如“it enhances people's productivity”与“不喜欢做清单”矛盾,且“immerses”用法错误。建议明确表达观点,避免自相矛盾,并注意动词形式。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to work spontaneously. They believe that lists can limit their creativity and flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中有拼写错误,如“aid”应为“add”,且表达不够自然。建议注意拼写和语法,同时使用更地道的表达方式。
Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's much more convenient and practical. For example, I can easily add or remove items without needing a pen or paper, which saves time and keeps everything organized.
× it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevent me from getting important items.
✓ it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from missing important items.
主语是单数it,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式prevents,而不是prevent。
× I usually make A to do list for my daily study because it helps me stay focused and organized.
✓ I usually make a to-do list for my daily study because it helps me stay focused and organized.
英文中不定冠词a后面应接小写字母,且to-do list是固定短语,需用连字符连接。
× People don't need to worry about what to do next, they just immerses themselves to try their best to do one thing.
✓ People don't need to worry about what to do next, they just immerse themselves to try their best to do one thing.
主语是复数People,谓语动词应使用复数形式immerse,而不是第三人称单数immerses。
× I can just aid or remove some items and time without need a pen or a paper, which saves time and keeps everything organized.
✓ I can just add or remove some items anytime without needing a pen or paper, which saves time and keeps everything organized.
aid用法错误,应为add;and time应为anytime;without need应改为without needing;a paper应去掉冠词,paper作为不可数名词。