List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强语法练习，尤其是动词时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the market. It helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time, so I can quickly finish my shopping and move on to other tasks.

Suggestion: 回答中表达了主要观点，但语法错误较多，句子不够流畅。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I make a list before I start working or studying. I write down the tasks I need to complete, and when I finish each one, I cross it off. This method helps me work more quickly and efficiently.

Suggestion: 回答中有较多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达原因时可以更具体。

Example: Some people may find making lists troublesome. Also, if they cannot complete all the tasks, they might feel discouraged and think they are not capable of finishing them.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且口头语较多。建议练习完整表达观点，减少填充词，使用连贯的句子。

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper because crossing out completed tasks gives me a strong sense of achievement. Using my phone can be distracting, so paper lists help me stay focused.

× When I go to the shop or market I will have at least to avoid improves buying and it can save my time that I can do something I need to do next quickly.

✓ When I go to the shop or market, I will at least have a list to avoid impulsive buying, and it can save my time so that I can do something I need to do next quickly.

原句中“will have at least to avoid improves buying”结构不正确，缺少必要的名词“list”，且“improves buying”应为“impulsive buying”（冲动购物）。建议使用“have a list to avoid impulsive buying”表达更准确。

× Yes, I do a list before I working or studying.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I work or study.

原句中“do a list”用法不当，正确表达应为“make a list”。此外，“before I working”中“working”应为动词原形“work”，因为“before”后接动词时用原形。

× Uh I will write another paper what I need to do and when I finish it I will cross it off and it can make me do something more quickly and efficiently.

✓ Uh, I will write on another paper what I need to do, and when I finish it, I will cross it off, which can help me do things more quickly and efficiently.

原句中“another paper what I need to do”缺少介词“on”，应为“write on another paper”。此外，“it can make me do something more quickly”表达不自然，改为“which can help me do things more quickly”更符合英语习惯。

× And when they did not finish the list, umm, I think that they may be denied themselves and think, uh, they cannot finish them.

✓ And when they do not finish the list, umm, I think that they may deny themselves and think, uh, they cannot finish it.

原句中“did not finish”时态不符合上下文，应该用一般现在时“do not finish”，因为是在描述一般情况。动词“denied”应为主动形式“deny”，且“finish them”中的“them”指代不明，应改为“finish it”指代“list”。

× Uh, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I finish something on the paper, I will crush it out.

✓ Uh, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I finish something on the paper, I will cross it out.

原句中“crush it out”用词错误，正确表达应为“cross it out”，表示划掉已完成的事项。

× And it is, uh, makes me have a strong sense of achievement.

✓ And it, uh, makes me have a strong sense of achievement.

原句中“it is, uh, makes”结构重复，应去掉“is”，保持主谓一致，改为“it makes”。

× And on the phone I will, uh, distracted and then.

✓ And on the phone, I will, uh, get distracted, and then...

原句缺少谓语动词，“I will distracted”不正确，应为“I will get distracted”。此外，句子未完成，建议补充完整。