List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when buying things for my family, like my daughter. This helps me remember everything we need and saves time. However, I don't always make a list when I go out for coffee, as it's usually just a quick visit.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct response, then explain how you prioritise tasks using lists. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work to organise my tasks. I usually prioritise important tasks and leave less urgent ones for later. This method helps me stay focused and complete my work efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. Additionally, they may find list-making boring or time-consuming. Therefore, they choose not to use lists in their daily activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Provide a clear preference with reasons, and use linking words to explain your choice logically and coherently.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost or forgotten, digital lists are easy to access and update anytime.

× Yes, I used to make list when I used to go for the coffee, but not every time.

✓ Yes, I used to make a list when I used to go for coffee, but not every time.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'coffee' is uncountable and does not need 'the' in this context.

× Guess I make list when I go for the work.

✓ I guess I make a list when I go to work.

'List' is countable singular and needs the article 'a'. Also, 'go for the work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to work'.

× Like I notify main main task which I have to go on a chat basis and I and which is not really an important I mean I leave that task and which one is really important for you?

✓ Like I note the main tasks which I have to do on a chat basis, and those which are not really important, I leave. The tasks which are really important, I do.

The phrase 'go on a chat basis' is incorrect; 'do on a chat basis' or 'note on a chat basis' is better. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Then I usually make this otherwise.

✓ Then I usually make it differently.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; 'it' refers to the list. Also, 'otherwise' is better replaced with 'differently' to express the intended meaning.

× Guess I make list when I go for the work.

✓ I guess I make a list when I go to work.

'List' is countable singular and requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go for the work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to work'.

× Like some people are very good enough to memorize in the world, so they don't want to make it because they have everything in their mind.

✓ Like some people are good enough at memorizing, so they don't want to make a list because they have everything in their mind.

The phrase 'good enough to memorize in the world' is incorrect; it should be 'good enough at memorizing'. Also, 'make it' is vague; 'make a list' is clearer.

× I would like to make a list in my phone because home is a type of things which always I will always try to keep in myself and there is no the other and if I list paper I I should hold that somewhere around maybe many reason.

✓ I would like to make a list on my phone because it is the kind of thing I always try to keep with me, and there is no other option. If I use paper, I have to hold it somewhere, which can be inconvenient for many reasons.

The preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The sentence is unclear and needs restructuring for clarity. 'Home' is incorrect; 'it' or 'phone' is appropriate. Also, 'list paper' should be 'use paper' or 'make a list on paper'.