ListPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Yes, absolutely. I think making a list is a very efficient way to help me buy some products in a short time. Besides that, it is a good way to save money as well.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Yes, I do that too. Especially when I study for a exam. I usually list some important time point or some key information that I have to deal with.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

They may think it is very threatening for them to make a list and they prefer to have a free lifestyle. They don't want to stick to the fixed schedule.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

I prefer to make a list on paper firstly so that I can organize my mind, but later I would copy it to my phone so that I can check the list at any time.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.5Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 6.0Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 85.0

Suggestion: 回答自然且内容相关,但可以更具体说明如何节省时间和金钱,避免使用模糊词汇如“some products”。

Example: Yes, absolutely. Making a shopping list helps me quickly find the items I need, which saves time. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary things, so I can save money.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 75.0

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误(a exam应为an exam),且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子。

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I study for an exam. I usually write down important deadlines and key information that I need to remember.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 80.0

Suggestion: 表达较好,但“threatening”用词不当,建议用更贴切的词汇如“restrictive”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Some people may find making lists restrictive because they prefer a free lifestyle and don't want to stick to a fixed schedule.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 90.0

Suggestion: 回答清晰且结构合理,但“firstly”用法稍显生硬,建议用更自然的表达。

Example: I prefer to make a list on paper at first to organize my thoughts, and then I copy it to my phone so I can check it anytime.

Grammar

Singular and plural issue

× Especially when I study for a exam.

Especially when I study for an exam.

冠词“a”后面应接以辅音音素开头的单数名词,“exam”以元音音素开头,故应使用“an”。

Singular and plural issue

× I usually list some important time point or some key information that I have to deal with.

I usually list some important time points or some key information that I have to deal with.

“time point”应使用复数形式“time points”,因为前面有“some”,表示多个时间点。

Vocabulary

FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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