List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Например, можно сказать: "Раньше я не делал списки, но теперь стараюсь составлять их перед походом в магазин, так как это помогает контролировать бюджет и избегать лишних покупок."

Example: I didn't use to make shopping lists, but now I try to prepare one before I go shopping because it helps me control my budget and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Нужно строить предложения более связно и использовать правильные времена. Например: "Когда я готовился к экзаменам, я начал составлять списки по совету учителя, и это действительно помогло мне эффективнее использовать время."

Example: When I was preparing for my exams, I started making lists on my teacher's advice, and it really worked. I spent less time wasting and more time studying effectively.

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более четким и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связующие слова и конкретные причины. Например: "Некоторым людям не нравится составлять списки, потому что это занимает много времени и кажется скучным. Лично для меня это было так в начале, но со временем я понял, что это очень полезно."

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming and boring. For me, it was boring at first, but as I kept doing it, I found it very useful.

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать подходящие слова и выражения. Например: "Я предпочитаю делать списки на телефоне, так как это удобнее благодаря множеству приложений и технологий. Однако некоторые люди предпочитают бумажные списки."

Example: In my opinion, making lists on the phone is easier than on paper because of the many apps and technology available. However, people are divided; some prefer paper lists.

× Actually not, but now I try to make a list before I go into the shopping because this helps me to control my budget and also do not do extra shopping.

✓ Actually not, but now I try to make a list before I go shopping because this helps me control my budget and also avoid doing extra shopping.

The modal verb 'do not' is incorrectly used here. Instead of 'do not do extra shopping', the correct form is 'avoid doing extra shopping' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'go into the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Modal verbs like 'do' should be used properly to form negatives or questions, and in this case, a different verb form is more appropriate.

× Yes I I'm sorry getting added to my exams I started doing the list.

✓ Yes, I'm sorry, getting stressed about my exams, I started making lists.

The phrase 'getting added to my exams' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'getting stressed about my exams'. Also, 'doing the list' is unnatural; the correct phrase is 'making lists'. The verb + -ing form 'getting' is used here but the object and preposition are incorrect, so the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correctness.

× This was advice of my teacher and it really working.

✓ This was advice from my teacher and it is really working.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'is' before 'really working'. Modal verbs and auxiliary verbs are necessary to form correct tenses. Here, 'it really working' is incorrect; it should be 'it is really working' to form the present continuous tense properly.

× I spend less times for nothing and spend approximately all of my time to study and this is effectively.

✓ I spend less time on unproductive activities and spend approximately all of my time studying, and this is effective.

The word 'times' is incorrectly pluralized; 'time' is an uncountable noun here and should be singular. Also, 'to study' should be 'studying' to correctly follow 'spend time'. The adjective 'effectively' is incorrectly used; it should be the adjective 'effective' to describe 'this'.

× I believe that there is several greens for this and the main would be because it's too long and that sometimes it will be boring for some people.

✓ I believe that there are several reasons for this, and the main one would be that it's too long and sometimes it can be boring for some people.

'There is several greens' is incorrect because 'several' requires a plural verb 'are' and 'greens' is the wrong noun; the correct word is 'reasons'. Also, 'the main would be because' is awkward; it should be 'the main one would be that'.

× For me it was also boring at the beginning but as I make it more and more for a period it was work listening and it's so useful.

✓ For me, it was also boring at the beginning, but as I made it more and more over time, it started working and it's very useful.

The phrase 'as I make it more and more for a period' is incorrect; past tense 'made' is needed to match 'was boring'. 'It was work listening' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it started working'. The verb forms and tenses need to be consistent and appropriate.

× In my opinion, making at least on our phone would be more easier than making it in a paper, because now is the innovation, technologies, time and there is a lot of apps and programs on the phone to make it easier.

✓ In my opinion, making at least a list on our phone would be easier than making it on paper, because now there is innovation, technology, time, and many apps and programs on the phone to make it easier.

The preposition 'on our phone' is correct, but 'in a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient. The phrase 'now is the innovation, technologies, time' is awkward and should be 'now there is innovation, technology, time'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the right meaning.