List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'you know' and make your answer more concise and clear. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a more natural flow.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy only the items I need. Therefore, I avoid unnecessary purchases and save money.

Suggestion: Try to reduce repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Example: Yes, as a manager, I always make a To Do List in a small notebook every morning. This method works well because I can check tasks regularly and never forget important duties.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition. Make your answer more direct and structured by using linking words and providing clearer reasons.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer not to commit to tasks or take responsibility. For example, my friends have told me they feel pressured by lists.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily check my small notebook during my commute. Moreover, using my phone is more distracting for me.

× The reason that I need this list every time is because it helps me in, you know, buying the right stuff that I really need and eventually I end up getting the thing that I, you know.

✓ The reason I need this list every time is that it helps me buy the right stuff that I really need, and eventually I end up getting the things that I want.

The original sentence has redundant phrases and unclear ending. 'Helps me in buying' should be 'helps me buy' to use the correct verb form after 'helps'. Also, 'the thing that I, you know' is incomplete and unclear; it should be completed for clarity. Simplifying the sentence structure improves readability and correctness.

× I in fact I keep like a small book in which I keep the To Do List every morning.

✓ In fact, I keep a small book in which I write my To Do List every morning.

The original sentence has repetition ('I in fact I') and awkward phrasing ('keep like a small book'). Removing redundancy and using 'write' instead of 'keep' for the list is more appropriate. Also, adding commas improves sentence flow.

× I will check it every time and it definitely works because I never forget anything that I might have.

✓ I check it every time, and it definitely works because I never forget anything I might have to do.

The phrase 'anything that I might have' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'to do' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'I will check' is changed to 'I check' to match habitual action. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I know that there are some of my friends who avoid making To Do List or list umm mainly because they don't really want to commit or they don't want to take responsibility for their own list.

✓ I know that some of my friends avoid making To Do Lists mainly because they don't really want to commit or take responsibility for their own lists.

'Some of my friends' is sufficient; 'there are some of my friends' is wordy. 'To Do List or list' is redundant; plural 'To Do Lists' is better. Also, 'their own list' should be plural to match 'friends'. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× As I explained earlier, I keep a small notebook in which I use it for listing out my To Do List.

✓ As I explained earlier, I keep a small notebook that I use for listing my To Do List.

The phrase 'in which I use it' is redundant; 'it' is unnecessary because 'notebook' is already the object. Also, 'listing out' can be simplified to 'listing'. This correction removes redundancy and improves sentence flow.

× It easier for me to check it umm, during my commute to work or anytime that I feels like it.

✓ It is easier for me to check it during my commute to work or anytime I feel like it.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'It'. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the subject 'I'. Removing filler words like 'umm' improves clarity.