List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn. Bạn có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. For instance, last week I made a list and didn't forget any items, which saved me time.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn.

Example: Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially when a deadline is approaching. It really helps me stay organized and ensures I complete tasks on time.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên chia câu và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it adds unnecessary pressure and makes their day rigid. For example, they prefer flexibility and the freedom to decide what to do spontaneously.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như 'umm' và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Hãy làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hoặc giấy.

Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit. However, if I don't have my phone, I use paper lists since they help me organize my time effectively.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially when deadline is coming.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially when the deadline is coming.

The noun 'deadline' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' before it to specify which deadline is being referred to. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× It's really good. It's really work because it helps me to complete the deadline on time.

✓ It's really good. It really works because it helps me to complete the deadline on time.

The phrase 'It's really work' is incorrect because 'work' needs to be in the third person singular form 'works' to agree with the subject 'It'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving modal verb usage.

× Some people dislike making list because some may feel that let's add unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because some may feel that it adds unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'let's add' is incorrect here; it should be 'it adds' to correctly express the idea.

× Some people dislike making list because some may feel that let's add unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because some may feel that it adds unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

The phrase 'let's add' is a contraction of 'let us add' and is incorrect in this context. The correct modal verb usage is 'it adds' to indicate that the action happens generally.

× Some people dislike making list because some may feel that let's add unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because some may feel that it adds unnecessary pressure or stress, making their day feel more rigid.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause it's really, umm, essential and convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's really, umm, essential and convenient.

The contraction ''cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for proper grammar and clarity.

× It helps me complete own time.

✓ It helps me manage my own time.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a possessive pronoun before 'own time'. The corrected sentence adds 'manage my' to complete the meaning and correct the sentence structure.