List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Otherwise, I often forget important items, which causes problems for me and my family.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Use clear and concise sentences, and include linking words to improve coherence. Also, be specific about how making lists helps your work.

Example: Yes, I make a list of my tasks because it helps me manage my time effectively. By organizing my work, I can complete everything on time, which improves my productivity.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant or unclear ideas. Focus on giving a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory or feel that lists limit their flexibility. Additionally, they might find lists stressful when they have a lot of pressure from work or studies.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear time references and grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, explain your preference, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Before I had a smartphone, I used to make lists on paper. However, now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient to carry and I can easily add items anytime.

× Yes definitely I make a list when I go to shopping because when I go to shop most of the time I for good thing.

✓ Yes definitely I make a list when I go shopping because most of the time I look for good things.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' using the verb + -ing form. Also, 'I for good thing' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I look for good things' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Should I buy everything? Should I learn to buy without listing?

✓ Should I buy everything? Should I learn to buy without making a list?

The phrase 'without listing' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'without making a list' to convey the intended meaning of buying without preparing a list.

× Every time I forget and it's creates a big problem for me and also big members of my family.

✓ Every time I forget and it creates a big problem for me and also for the other members of my family.

The phrase 'it's creates' is incorrect; 'it creates' is correct subject-verb agreement. Also, 'big members' is incorrect; it should be 'other members' to refer to family members.

× Yes, I make a list of my work and I would say that if I list my work, I can insure them to complete it in lifetime or in in time.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work and I would say that if I list my work, I can ensure to complete it in time or within a lifetime.

The word 'insure' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'ensure' meaning to guarantee. Also, 'in lifetime' should be 'within a lifetime' or 'in time' to express the correct time frame.

× So completing the work anytime is a great virtue and I think it works very well. So if you have the time management, very proper time management.

✓ So completing the work on time is a great virtue and I think it works very well. So if you have proper time management,

The phrase 'completing the work anytime' is vague; 'on time' is the correct expression. Also, 'the time management' should be 'proper time management' without 'the' to sound natural.

× Some people don't like making list because I think they are more meritorious and they have the more human sense and they are God gifted talented because individuals have can have a lot of pressure that can be study pressure or work pressure or others.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because I think they are more meritorious and have more common sense and are God-gifted and talented because individuals can have a lot of pressure that can be study pressure, work pressure, or others.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'making'. 'The more human sense' is incorrect; 'more common sense' is appropriate. 'God gifted talented' should be hyphenated as 'God-gifted and talented'. Also, 'have can have' is redundant; 'can have' is correct.

× So in this pressures the list of the works can be forgotten easily.

✓ So under these pressures, the list of work can be forgotten easily.

'In this pressures' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'under these pressures'. 'The list of the works' is awkward; 'the list of work' or 'the list of tasks' is better.

× But they don't forget, but they don't forget maybe.

✓ But maybe they don't forget.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Reordering and simplifying to 'But maybe they don't forget' improves clarity and grammar.

× When I don't have a smartphone, it's about more than 20/20/12.

✓ When I didn't have a smartphone, it was about more than 2012.

The tense should be past 'didn't have' to match the time reference. Also, 'it's about more than 20/20/12' is unclear; likely intended as 'it was about more than 2012' referring to the year.

× That time I listed on my on the script on paper.

✓ At that time, I made my list on paper.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'I listed on my on the script on paper' should be rephrased to 'I made my list on paper' for clarity and correctness.

× But now I have a phone, I think it's much more easier because whenever I go anywhere, I carry with my phone.

✓ But now I have a phone, I think it's much easier because whenever I go anywhere, I carry my phone with me.

'Much more easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is correct. Also, 'carry with my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'carry my phone with me'.

× So when I carry with my phone, I take down, take down that.

✓ So when I carry my phone, I take notes of that.

The phrase 'take down, take down that' is awkward and unclear. The correct expression is 'take notes of that' to indicate writing something down.