List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e onek hesitation ar filler words use korchen, ja natural ar effective kotha bolar dike baje probhab fele. Apnar uttor ke sohoje bujhte hole, prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor proyojon moto supporting details din. Apni sentence gulo ke shongjukto korte linking words use korte paren, ar vocabulary aro boro korte paren.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. When I was younger, my mother used to prepare the list for me. Nowadays, my wife often makes the list and sends it to me via phone, which is very convenient.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu sentence incomplete ar repetition ache, ja answer ke clear ar effective korte badha day. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking words diye supporting details add korun. Sentence gulo ke shesh porjonto complete korun ar unnecessary repetition theke birat thakun.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work whenever I have time because it helps me save time and organize my tasks efficiently. For example, by following my list, I can prioritize important work and avoid forgetting anything.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure er problem ache, ja answer ke bujhte oshubidha kore. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking words diye supporting details din. Apnar opinion clear bhabe bolun ar sentence gulo ke shongjukto korun.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to organize tasks in their own way and prioritize them as they go. However, I believe making a list is essential for working more efficiently because it helps keep track of all tasks.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar word choice er bhul ache, ar sentence gulo onek lamba ar confusing. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor supporting details din, ar linking words use korun. Vocabulary aro boro korun ar sentence gulo ke sohoje bujha jabe emon bhabe gathan korun.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone nowadays. When I was a student, my mother used to make lists on paper. But now, my wife prepares the list, takes a photo of it, and sends it to me via WhatsApp, so I can easily check and buy the items.

× my mother used to made a list when I went to the shop

✓ my mother used to make a list when I went to the shop

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Made' is past tense, but after 'used to' we need the base verb 'make'. In English (Bangladesh), this is a common mistake; remember 'used to' + base verb for habitual past actions.

× Now my wife uh, may prepare the list uh, so that I can.

✓ Now my wife uh, may prepare the list uh, so that I can.

The sentence is incomplete but no clear third person singular verb error is present here. No correction needed.

× Yes, when I get time I prepare a list for my work because I find it really helpful as it saves time and it helps me to organize my work properly and with the help of the list I sometimes I.

✓ Yes, when I get time I prepare a list for my work because I find it really helpful as it saves time and helps me to organize my work properly, and with the help of the list, I sometimes...

The sentence is incomplete and has some redundancy ('it helps me' and 'helps me'). Also, 'I sometimes I' is incorrect. The verb 'helps' is correct for third person singular 'it'. The sentence needs to be completed or rephrased for clarity. In English (Bangladesh), avoid repeating subjects unnecessarily and complete your sentences for clarity.

× Some people ignore because they may organize items more efficiently and they can do them better as a priority basis and I but I believe making a list is essential for working more efficiently.

✓ Some people ignore making lists because they may organize items more efficiently and can do them better on a priority basis, but I believe making a list is essential for working more efficiently.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure issues. 'Ignore' needs an object ('making lists'). 'As a priority basis' should be 'on a priority basis'. The conjunctions 'and I but I' is incorrect; it should be 'but I'. In English (Bangladesh), ensure conjunctions connect clauses properly and use correct prepositional phrases.

× When I was at school going student my mother made the list using a paper but now my wife prepare a lift and he can he took a snap and send it to me via messenger or WhatsApp so that I can check it and purchase items.

✓ When I was a school-going student, my mother made the list using paper, but now my wife prepares a list and she can take a snap and send it to me via Messenger or WhatsApp so that I can check it and purchase items.

The verb 'prepare' should be 'prepares' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my wife'. 'Lift' is a typo for 'list'. 'He can he took' is incorrect; it should be 'she can take'. Also, 'using a paper' should be 'using paper'. In English (Bangladesh), ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronouns, and avoid typos for clarity.