List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Та хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик дараалалтай, алдаагүй хэлбэрээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, эхэндээ шууд асуултад хариулах, дараа нь дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбар өгөх, үгсийн хувьд илүү энгийн, ойлгомжтой үгсийг ашиглах нь зүйтэй.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and remember everything I need to buy. This way, shopping becomes easier and faster for me.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, ойлгомжтой, алдаагүй хэлбэрээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Түүнчлэн, холбоос үгсийг ашиглан өгүүлбэрүүдийг холбож, логик дараалал үүсгэх нь чухал.

Example: Yes, I make a list of my tasks every day. It helps me remember what I need to do, so I can work more efficiently.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, утга агуулгатай, алдаагүй хэлбэрээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн сэдвийн дагуу холбогдох тайлбар, жишээг оруулах нь зүйтэй.

Example: Some people may find making lists stressful because it reminds them of many tasks. For example, people with ADHD might prefer a more flexible approach rather than strict organization.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик дараалалтай илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үгсийг ашиглан өгүүлбэрүүдийг холбож, дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбар өгөх нь зүйтэй.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to access. Since I always carry my phone, I can quickly check my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes I always do with finish a bit feels more organized and helps me remember what I have to buy when I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, I always do. Finishing a bit feels more organized and helps me remember what I have to buy when I'm shopping.

The original sentence lacks proper verb form and structure. 'Finish a bit' should be 'Finishing a bit' to correctly use the verb + -ing form as a gerund acting as the subject. Also, the sentence needs to be split for clarity.

× Making this is more easy to shop I think it's.

✓ Making this makes shopping easier, I think.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Every day I list everything that I have to work on and it feels more easy to remember when I see my ways on and it's work 'cause it's I, I see the list and then I have to know what I'm have to know.

✓ Every day I list everything I have to work on, and it feels easier to remember when I see my ways. It works because I see the list and then I know what I have to do.

'More easy' should be 'easier' for correct comparative adjective use. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear, so it has been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Maybe it's more stressful for them to have seeing a list of the to do work People have ADHD doesn't like to lose something or organize something.

✓ Maybe it's more stressful for them to see a list of the work to do. People with ADHD don't like to lose things or organize things.

'Have seeing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to see'. Also, 'People have ADHD' should be 'People with ADHD'. Prepositions and article usage have been corrected.

× They just want to meow meow meow when they need the list they just want.

✓ They just want to meow when they need the list; they just want that.

The sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. It has been rephrased to make sense, though the original meaning is ambiguous.

× I prefer making list on my phone 'cause it's more easy to see.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's easier to see.

'More easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative adjective is 'easier'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list' to include the article.

× Umm I carry a lot on my phone everywhere, every time my phone with me, so I can see my list easily and fast.

✓ I carry my phone everywhere all the time, so I can see my list easily and quickly.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. It has been restructured for clarity and correct adverb usage ('fast' changed to 'quickly').